First few seconds remind me of Tiesto - Traffic actually. How progressive is that.

Production is lacking room and crispness. Nice synth sound going on in the break. But it's all just too dull and empty. Some reverb here and there would do good. Percs need some more power too.

Actually I get a Traffic feel all over. That's not necessarily a compliment, cause I dont like Traffic. But on the other hand you created a nice atmosphere by thinking minimal, which is good and even refreshing. Reason for you to carry on like this.

Oh and change the structure, DJ can't do shit with this length of 4:18. Make it for the DJs man, to get your stuff around.

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hehe thnx for the replies , Ive posted an updated you know about 5:40 minutes.. but if im making the track longer its starting to get boring..

Traffic.
Tiesto's traffic. I, did not, get my inspiration from traffic , it's from a fairly old marco v track, cant remember wich one again though.. he's the only producers who reálly inspires my in this song.
anyway, ill keep working on this.
thanks Yarune for pointing out the percs, and the dullness and emptyness.. after hearing my track so often I cant really tell "whats going on" anymore.
thnx all make sure to listen the update sometime!

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