hey i loop,

I like where you're going with that bass sound.. it's cool & different. But it sounds distorted as do a few other sounds in your song, seems it needs a bit of polishing.

But your ideas are cool and the song in general is energetic. I bit of refining to make the sounds crisp & clean would go a long way!

Keep it up,
Trev

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thanks for the feedback guys, i will definately look back and see what i can do about the elements you suggested changing, if I do change anything I will put up and update
glad you guys like some of the elements used...

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Originally posted by alanzo Did you start your own label or something? haha 'Infinity Loop Music' Dude.. this track is horrible Distorted really bad, lead is cheesy, composition drags on without going anywhere

+1

Take off that constructive feedback filter and slap on a lowpass or something..

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Originally posted by iloop alanzo: ok, no more sarcasm then: I think you are the worst reviewer, even more so than n00bs that don't know what they are talking about, they seem to have more depth in their review process.

For god sakes dude, is just a review! get over and dont take it personal pfft, lol ...
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320 kbps ? Hmm... The bassline sounds very analog, and the kickdrum is fucking up everything!!! Are you serious about this? Yeah I saw your tune at audiojelly today actually... But this just sounds terrible, I'm sorry. Are you sure you uploaded the right sample? For your own dignity I suggest you remove the link cuz this is just awful...

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Originally posted by alexpea 320 kbps ? Hmm... The bassline sounds very analog, and the kickdrum is fucking up everything!!! Are you serious about this? Yeah I saw your tune at audiojelly today actually... But this just sounds terrible, I'm sorry. Are you sure you uploaded the right sample? For your own dignity I suggest you remove the link cuz this is just awful...

+1

sorry dude, I kinda liked that generic cheezy lead, but everything else is simply fucked up.
didn't like that bell..the kick is distorted and distorting everything else..nice bassline, but the top layer is fucking up the mid-low area (and causing the lead to sound distorted in some moments). I can't hear any percussions here...except for that little hihat. didn't like that watery effect either.

2/10

good luck in the future man..

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Originally posted by alanzo Now say that you think they're your #1 producers and that you think their reviews are worthless because they know what they're talking about.

LOL ... I gave him feedback once over msg, and he was like, are you sure you are listening to the same sample huh? because in my headphones sounds perfect, some people takes critic always in defensive, not offense iloop, but you are pretending to be someone you are not, yet .
Something I have noticed about all ur track is, the lack of a real theme and that your tunes drives to nowhere imo, and the excesive and brutal use of reverb, just constructive critic dude, dont take it personal at all .
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Originally posted by alanzo Now say that you think they're your #1 producers and that you think their reviews are worthless because they know what they're talking about.

you are so n00b alan

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what a crap track...i wonder why audiojelly sells this

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sounds realy amateur-ish. i would not buy this.

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Originally posted by alanzo Oh yeah... old photo.. Have lost a lot of weight since then and got contacts.. been working on the 'trance producer image' that kinda crap. Need to get scott to put some new pics up... I look like such a porker in those pics. Little more recent (although kinda old, too I was ass drunk when that pic was taken... can ya tell?

JEEZZ!! Anal, you're screaming for attention. Why you need all that, your ego is big enough, arrogant fuck! And why is it you want to have 'trance image' it's not gonna work for you for sure babyface!

Now you really like to tear tracks apart with 'reviews', Anal, but you just tear without mentioning why you tear. Good for you being honest, but constructive points make good reviews here, as that's what producers here are after, and your reviews are FAR from good. I'm really wondering why people come to you, it's not your reviews and obviously not your porker face.



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Well Anal's first post is indeed spot on, too bad it's only tearing. I do like the idea of the bass tho it's too distorted. Lead is too loud, makes you think as if there's no theme. Strings and percussion can be heard when the lead is pushed back and eq'd better. I'd suggest add more driving percs as well.

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