Melody and bass dont fit, it's no good. Atmosphere is sad, I prefer dark sounding.

It's not always about placing delays on every synth you make.. And I'm really missing some fx here, there's always plenty in real good prog! Work on the percs too. This is a few hours work at most.

Sorry, but doens't do it at all for me!

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your welcome balti

-yarune, yea well ive been producing for 9 months now.. starting to figure things out its going quite well now you got that right about the couple of hours work.. I think all toghether it may have 2 or 3 hours was just experimenting .. glad some people did like it !

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Originally posted by Takkra your welcome balti -yarune, yea well ive been producing for 9 months now.. starting to figure things out its going quite well now you got that right about the couple of hours work.. I think all toghether it may have 2 or 3 hours was just experimenting .. glad some people did like it !

Aye, always keep experimenting

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Originally posted by richg101 love the beat and the percs. specially the bongo. ooh and that nice kick! - much better now your kicks are good! synth @ 29 secs is nice but add loads of reverb to the already delayed sound.. you know, like a large room echo. also turn it down in the mix by quite a bit. also bring it in later on in the track and bring the pads that follow it in at the point the synths come in. those pads are nice, really haunting. up the volume on that and add some delay. i def think they should come in on their own before that synth comes in. plucked guitary sound is nice but go for a quick attack and release sine wave instead! with some big delay on it. break overal is nice but getts a bit too busy and loud for the vibe you have started. try lowering some of the volumes or maybe remove some of the parts? main section. is again a bit loud for me. its the synth that first appears at 3;33. it just ruins it i think go subtle with this one. you have hit on a really nice vibe. try and tone down the complexity and instead work with a more limited number of tracks of melody. this sounds like a grilling but i honestly really like this and its so much nicer than your previous work.. you just get better and better. i can just hear loads of potential for a minimal chill in this tune. keep playing with this one until you have it just right cos its a nice job. rich oh and ps. BUMP!

I concur with rich, u are improving urself alot man keep it up .
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the track sounds like a bit some kind of M.I.K.E. production in my opninion, but the production itself is a bit empty i have to say, nice sequences, though.

i suggest you to fill the track with some percloops or something, and make a proper buildup for the track, a proper melody which leads into the break, also some fxes would be cool, some distorted fx or something would do the thing i think,

keep it up, mate!

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whOa thanks kopi

yea the production is empty.. definitly adding more fx's and a real melody.. wow im getting alot of good advice on this one thanks for listening

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Intro kinda reminded me of ATB - Long way home for some strange reason

Sounds pretty minimalist so far. I think the intro could probably use something more - maybe like an ethnic-sounding breakbeat in the background, or simply more percussions and effects.

Not really my style so far. I find it sounds pretty empty (unless that's what you intended)

Gets better towards the end. This sounds very proggy.

Like somebody said earlier, it's got potential. I'd definately like to see an updated version later on. keep it up!

hi aquarian thanks for your words, stimulating
I think the update will be finished within a week.

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bump!

hey takkra.

good to see the track is getting a lot of feedback! its a nice track and im looking forward to the update!

after listening to it a few times id say definately remain minimal but use the parts you have to their best. instead of making up for an empty sound with more tracks.. play with eq/effects etc..

still enjoyin mate

rich

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hey rich thanks for your pointers! your advice is really helping my productions

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