Im digging the gated pad you have, fit's in very well.

Percussion is mint, not to loud, but just right..

After the break, how the pad and a few elements come back in which were in the beginning, make it seem a bit repetitive. Maybe if you threw in something that stood out as to just the pads and the gates, which were in the beginning, it would make the track's second half much more interesting, very well done though, some small changes can make it even better then it already is!

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Hi Jay,

Nice kick to start with, and percussion intro. Coming in with the bass now, very analouge - like like it. Im not a big fan of the choir synths tho - not my stuff, coming in with the arp yeah im liking that.

Into the breakdown, again nice simple effective intro then up with the arp, i like it, when the percussion comes back in its nice and light, is that a HP Filter on there???.

I like the melody too, ure right...its what horizons sound like .

I really like this track alot, i would love to play it but its skipping (to protect theft im guessing here).

Keep up the good work!

Terry

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Originally posted by Terry Barker I really like this track alot, i would love to play it but its skipping (to protect theft im guessing here).

Skipping? Where?? If you like you may play it, try dl-ing it again.

Thanks Terry!

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I will try 2morro...

its not only skipping, the quiality is changing also... its very strange

Thought id let you know.

Terry

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Originally posted by Terry Barker I will try 2morro... its not only skipping, the quiality is changing also... its very strange Thought id let you know. Terry

Ok thanks. But I uploaded a 192 kbps full track, and downloaded & listened to it fully and was ok, so there must have been problem with the connection while you downloaded...

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Hi Jay, just dropping a reply in...

The track has downloaded fine now, must just be some random internet download bollocks, aww well...

Will Play this on tuesday, and a few after that

Terry

excellent track, with some original sounds and a very driving beat and baseline. GOod job.

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If I'm not mistaken, the bassline sounds like a gated pad as well. We likes it. Great use of unusual elements...or Unusual use of great elements. Good one.

nice track this one..some life in it. would have been great if the highs where more crisper. also the gated synth needs some kind of variation on the filter cutoff. maybe more sharper ? but i like this track.

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suneel