The first thing I hear is the phaser on the hats. I don't like that sound, it's too simple.
The strings, the ooh-pad and that guitar/harp like synthy are great. The other percs that come in are good as well.
There's some reverb on the bassline, which is giving some high mud (echoey sh sh sh), try to cut the highs from the verb. Otherwise the bassline is good.
Liking that arp starting at 1:10.
Solid kick. Call it sick!
This is more stereo than your other productions, that's why the mix sounds a lot more brightened up.
In the intro u use a lead synth which is a tad too raw sounding to me. (At full power at 1:51) Try putting a phaser or so on that (and remove it from the hats )
Break now, synth come in real nicely, then a standard but good climax.
Now the melody is ok, but it definitely has no hook to grasp it into my mind.
Overall I think this is on of your best production so far, and that might be of the mixdown which has just improved.
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Thornhill,Toronto, Canada
mmm thanx guys
and glad u liked it somewhat jay m hehe thanx
and about me sharing tracks, i wanna share with u guys, and secondly i already send it out to labels and everyone.... , so why cant i do both ?
no harm done
Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Stockholm & in my mind
okay listening right now, first thing I noticed was the bassline that comes in at 55, what an awesome sound
the break is also very nice, it has a good bottom so I imagine that it would be really nice to hear this out
overall it's a pretty nice track, although I believe that it could be extended without harming it but that's up to you
what I noticed is that the eqing overall isn't too good, it almost feels as if yo 've put a resonant filter over the whole track. it's very hard on the ears as it is right now :/
but apart from that it's a very nice track so try to work some more on the eqing
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Sep-24-2004 12:31
trancelations
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Aug 2004
Location: boskoop
great tune
Sep-24-2004 14:45
dEEkAy
Guest
Registered: Not Yet
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Great track
nothing to complain about except for the EQing maybe.
Sounds like u removed too many of the Mid/Low-Mid Frequencies, which makes the track sound a bit like its got a hole
Sep-24-2004 16:18
thoughtlessjex
Yakkity Yak
Registered: May 2004
Location: Chapel Hill, North Carolina
The phaser on the hats is weird, but cool. I like.
The kick is fine, but then again, I'm partial to kicks with a big after decay.
I don't like something in the atmosphere from 2:20-2:30. The delay that compliments the music in the rest of the song seems weak in that short interval.
I really like the atmosphere created by the guitar stuffs.
Very chilled track. I like it.
Sep-24-2004 20:13
sooper
Beat Slut
Registered: Jul 2001
Location: Toronto
Wow.
I love your bass.. it has so much texture, and its so rolling!
The kick is really thick and tasty! very nice.
The snare seems a bit quiet though.
What a driving song! Fine fine work.
I look forward to hearing more of your toons.
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Sep-24-2004 23:43
EtherealSL
experiments underway
Registered: Sep 2003
Location: Washington D.C.
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Originally posted by .A.Y.
sounds very fruity (even that you dont use fruityloops)
how can you tell that something SOUNDS like it's made in fruityloops.... i don't get it.
sunquest, your song: like many others i don't like the intro, and i really think that a subbass is necessary to make this song absolutely kickass. I kept waiting for a deep bass to kick in but it never happened... breakdown and lead are very good, very pro... as well as your sound and mastering
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