Im missing some percs from the track if they were in they would be banging idk about the intro not 100% sure on it but sounds good so far keep it up .

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i think before u suddenly bring in the lead synth(jp8000), there should be a vocal of 3 or 4 words (like "the end of time" in an american accent), then slam the lead in, i think it would suit it better.

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Hey,
Listening ..... Sweet intro, very relaxing, soft dreams, sounds like the end of a video game or sort of :P, bass, kick, sound really nice. Mastering sounds excellent to me, that synth lead that appears, dunno sounds a bit flat though imo, WTF? Finished? LOL, I forgot was a demo, damn.
In overall, so far sounds great man, I am sure the final one will be great, keep it up .
Kopi =o.

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Hey gasten,

While listening:

Nice bells! Pads coming now. I'd like 'em phatter.. Try to give it some more low end (especially that low string) and maybe a wide reverb on it.
Kick kicking in along with bass. Sounding pretty good. Synth work on top is very nice. Nice little percs there as well. Clap seems a bit too reverbed if you ask me, I like them more upfront. Bass is getting a bit boring I must say, it lacks power. Maybe because it's detuned (?) a bit too much. Are you sure you want that kick that way in the break.. ah it fades now, maybe fad it earlier. Yep pads need more low end.. Piano fits in perfectly. Sound of it is ok, could be more subtle. Lead synth there is surprising, good thing. Don't really like the sound.. Main part now, feels like it's lacking drive because of the minimalistic perc work and the somewhat flat bass. EQ-ing is pretty decent.

Few tiny things, I think you could work on more drive and fullness in this mix. Overall very nice work already. Heel niet slecht!

Grtz
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thnx for all the great comments, we will take it in our final mix.

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