Hi Terry!

Pads are ok, but i'm not too fond because I'd expect higher tones, maybe lay something on top, to get a tad more emotion and character.. Liking the bass line, nice driving percs as well. Chord change, ok, but I'm waiting for additional stuff here. Maybe some acid lead fx or stuff. I've heard the bells by now m8, tho they have a nice sound. Melody sounds familiar to me. But still great one, great sounding when the lead sound takes over. It sound a bit drowned in reverb, losing power here. The sound you bring at 6:02, you could do that before the break too.

Yeps that melody gives me the goosebumps. Talk to me if you need remixers.

Cheers
-Jay

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Cheers Jay,

Im working onto it dont worry, ill get back to you about remixes if i decide on that one mate. Thanx for the offer, ill Pm you about it sometime.

Hey mate! Outstanding quality piece you've got here, it's got a unique character but delivers all the standard trance elements people are used to and want to hear. The melody is great, and the synths sound really nice.
Mix-wise it's good but I think the kick could be turned down slightly - not much, just a bit. Otherwise not much to say, except great production. Well done!

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Thanx for the feedback, theres so much you can do with it. I have to admit that i have used loops as the percussion which im gonna ditch. Im gonna put some backing synths in there and work on more effects and rebuild the percussion. As pointed out maybe make the main synth a tad dryer and crisp everything up.

The kick sounds a bit mono, but the bassline is very driving and good. Hmmm.. The blip-melody after 4.15 is sweet But I actually don't think the pads fit so well together with it... It just sounds un-harmonic. But the melody is nice. Oh, you should make the synths playing it bigger! Deeper and more punchy!

EDIT: Haha, I meant - The kick sounds a bit muted

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Thanx For The Feedback Alex

feels empty.. some more subs on the bass, the bell is abit dry. nice melodies, kick, hats. maybe some more percs to make it more interesting.

its pretty good, just needs more work.

Always good to hear productions by you!

The melody is fairly simple and a bit predictable, but it still sounds very good. Really like the synths used! I really like the very high pitched strings too! Percussion is very good. Really like the ambient noises that come in around 5:20, and then the gated note that follows it.

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Nice melody but I can't help but feel that perhaps it needs another element to complement what you have there (Personal opinion though).

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I could imagine this getting a serious remix as its got a great melody which is very under emphasised imho.

+1 as well.

Awesome track overall! Guarantee I'd listen to it often if I had the full.

It's a great track that sounds like it's just ready to burst out into an epic, mind-numbing incredible ground-breaking track. Needs a few synths in the midrange, etc. Let it sit for a few months and give it a remix, I bet it would rock our socks off!

Awesome to hear the recent productions coming out of FL Studio as well! Sounds very pro, very well mastered, etc.

Would love to hear your thoughts on my latest track.

Cheers!

Thanx for the support and feeback david.

I doin a bit work to the piece now, thinkim gonna restructure the whole production and give the background some emphasis.

thats a nice 1 mate the bass is like the 1 avb use's would u b able 2 tell me how 2 get it

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Originally posted by djmill2005 thats a nice 1 mate the bass is like the 1 avb use's would u b able 2 tell me how 2 get it

Its basically an analouge lead with delay, i will make a tutorial someday if i get round to it.