Overall very nice work!
Piano is good.
The kick is ok guys.
The clap is almost not hearable in the lead.
Why did you used only a closed hihats?
overall 3.7/5

trance music in general ranges from medium speed to very fast, I dont know what that guy was talking about saying youre track was too fast... its fine!!

Thnks The Drow. I used open hihats, but not too present ones, so that's why some people comment that there is some space left to fill in the mix...

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yep i dont find it too fast,, enjoying it atm

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Good kick, maybe you could give it more low. Cool acid fx! But they are very loud. Bass is a little bit to high. Nice piano. The intro sound cool but maybe a little less in a hurry. Now it sounds like you want to put a much in a few minutes.

The intro to the break is to long I think. Now put some more piano in the break, some low piano tunes.

The melody sound is cool but maybe you can edit the melody to get the drive.

Pretty good... I don't think it would have won though... And btw - the melody in flowtation is terrible and the track needed to be remixed. Just as their DJs Fans and Freaks track.

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It's wonderful. The only thing I don't like is that all the high end percs all but drop out at 4:28, which is pretty sad, because they never really came in. I'd like it if you'd nudge them forward just a leeetle bit. In fact, throughout the song, they seem to be pushed into the back. Other than that, it's one of the best songs I've heard.

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Thanks bbjosh, Dave, Alex and thoughtlessjex. I'm uploading a version with slight changes.

The kick has more low end and is louder, the open hihat is more present and so is the clap. I hope you can hear difference

Uploading atm... Completed. Njoy

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Last edited by Jay M on Jun-29-2004 at 17:06

u rock man im afraid i am not very originalbut the piano is just great!

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I really enjoy with this song, good leads, very good bassline (for me the best of the song), good melodies,good job! . But i think that the kick is very loud, it disturbs the good bassline, maybe if u change the kick, the song it would be better

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I like a lot trance music, and progressive, my preffer dj is Tiesto and i would like to know how he makes his songs :P