Registered: Jun 2003
Location: Lausanne, Switzerland
Hola,
i actually like this .. only a few things really disturbs my ears...
i'm not too keen on the bassline sounds, i think you can do much better with that, even with reason only
Clap sounds really bad, sorry i think you can improve this, there's a few mixing thing i would change here and there, like that first synth seq at the very beginning which is a bit loud for me. Drums could be more fuller, try to add some perc or try loop
you also need some more background seq ( like synth etc... ) (personal taste) but i thinkit can make the whole thing even more trippy a few FX sounds could also add something to the atmosphere.
but beside theses minors few points it grooves quite well maybe some more variation on the congas ?
keep it up
Jan-19-2005 03:35
DJ_TonKs
Everest Team Member
Registered: Dec 2001
Location: France (lille)
i agree with koris, but i like this bassline
very good job ^^
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Jan-19-2005 15:43
EtherealSL
experiments underway
Registered: Sep 2003
Location: Washington D.C.
i wish the kick had a little more hi end to it... and a little more thump as well.. the bass seemed to take away from the kick so nothing unique about the kick showed through
as for the rest of the elemnts in the track: fantastic
didn't even realize the track was playing until it was over (which is a very good thing in terms of proggy music)
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Jan-21-2005 08:24
John
In Praise Of The Sun
Registered: Sep 2001
Location: Delft / Den Haag / Dordrecht,
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Originally posted by Massive84
Ya volume is a bit low, but can't get it louder it will clip..not sure how to fix that.
mastering? try t-racks or wavelab or something..
tune itself sounds massive, massive still the same sweet melody as the original yet not as 'happy'. love the lead sound as well. and percussion is great too, although i agree with others on the clap.
good work! (and finally a post in here again by me w00t now im studying again:S)
Very nice atmospheric shivering pads. Tell me how you did those.
Pitched pads are nice. Nice pluck. Niiice!
Bass seems to change volume every time, depending on note (dunno why (resonance?), could be my speakers tho...)
Maybe it's a bit too long, it makes me so damn sleepy.. ah well, maybe you intended that
Try to get a hold of Cool Edit Pro 2 (or so. T-racks compresses it all, i don't really like that). You can limit the track a bit to make it louder, but watch out when you do that.
still the same sweet melody as the original yet not as 'happy'. love the lead sound as well. and percussion is great too, although i agree with others on the clap.
now im studying again:S)
, am gonne venture to Logic these months hehe. I have seen the light 
