the break around 2.30 or 2.35 ? is definatly too plain here but this is commercial/euro and dude please remake this track to bring out the melody because IM IN LOVE WITH IT!!! fantastic its about time somebody posted something diffrent on here everybody just makes/listens to "chill out , melodic , dream dance" and then brandishes everything to cheesy if its not lol , nice vocals i think your sounds are a little too plain add a few more crashes etc to keep things flowing a little more perc and beef up the sound the runs with the melody
4/5 for its style , really nice track imo well done mate
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Ben Agg
May-11-2005 13:32
BrainWave2
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: Rennes, France
thx 4 ur comment!
yeah u're right this track is too simple, i'll add more fx, and other sounds. romi told me to add verses (i'll have to write new lyrics) and i think it's a good idea so i'll do it too... i'll try to do a 6/7 min version of this with an intro and a conclusion.
Nice cheese production. Not all cheese is bad. And a lot of people like music like this, so respect the cheese please
I'd fill this one a bit with a layer on the bass, it's just a little empty around the low-mid.
Personally I find that snare a bit harsh, I'd suggest to try a more crisp clap in combination with a snare there.
With what effect did you do the autotune on the vocal? I want to give my vocals some nice fx, this is one I might use in my cheese too!
And she's singing in a French accent, kinda funny.
it's cool to have a comment from u since i really like ur productions
thx for ur advices, i'll try to do what u say
do u mean that i have to add another MIDI track with another VSTi for the same bass?
i used yamaha pitch fix for the vocal =)
lol she has a french accent... mm i'll say that to her, she will have to improve in english lol
Hehe cheers. Well about her accent, it's kinda cool, a French accent is always better than a Dutch accent in english, no offence to her
You could just put a new line there yeah, with a new VST indeed with a colourful plucked instument or maybe a (choir) pad to fill the gap there. See what fits best, but only do so if you really think it's better, don't just change things because others tell you to.
Arp is nice, though your kick is way too loose. Bassline is destroygin the whole track imo. Imo the sound at 1.17 doesn't belong in such a track. It's too stereo as well At 2.11 and 2.14 there's some offkeys in the chords... At 2.20 when she speaks, I can clearly tell that she isn't english Hehehe... Hmm... I dunno what to say about this track really... Good try, but too simple produced..
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May-12-2005 13:27
BrainWave2
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: Rennes, France
thx 4 ur comments!
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Imo the sound at 1.17 doesn't belong in such a track
yeah definitely i'll remove this sound...
quote:
Bassline is destroygin the whole track imo
mm what's wrong with the bass? do i have to change the sound? or the rythm?
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You could just put a new line there yeah, with a new VST indeed with a colourful plucked instument or maybe a (choir) pad to fill the gap there
ok i'll try that!
when the new version of this song will be finished i'll post it here!
I'll concur with the majority of those who posted comments - it does have more of a euro feel than our beloved trance however Euro was the style which introduced me to trance. I've been randomly listening to music produced by TA's and I must say that your track is one of the best tracks I have heard. Keep up the great work!
May-30-2005 22:37
BrainWave2
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: Rennes, France
thx for your comment!
yeah it seems that it is euro... i'll try to add some trancy elements in it...
i'm working on two new vocal trance tracks, this time i hope it'll really be trance! =)
At 2.11 and 2.14 there's some offkeys in the chords... At 2.20 when she speaks, I can clearly tell that she isn't english 
