Hi guys,
I finished an original mix today. It's a chill-out trance. I would appreciate all the opinions from everybody, since I've been trying to improve my mixing and mastering technniques.
The song is called Deep Blue
I would also like to thank dj-sean for his comments and insights regarding production, it helped me a great deal.
Thanks

Deep Blue (128kbps)
or download here.

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Last edited by Design on Jan-22-2004 at 06:34

Glad my comments could be helpful! This track is good, I think the weakest element of it is the kick personally and I think that maybe changing it to something with more midrange/highend would give your track the added sparkle that you claim it lacks. I think the bassline could also use a little more cutoff on it to give it a bit of a grinding sound. Aside from that, I like the pads, effects and piano; good job.

would appreciate if you could post a link where i can d/l an mp3...streaming is way too slow...stops every 2 secs....(and if possible someplace where i don't need to register to d/l)....

i prefer www.acidplanet.com

cheer

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Thanks dj-sean for the comments.
Deep Blue (128 kbps download)

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Left comment in another thread, think its good.

Direct Download Link is HERE

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thanks cheggy

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Anyone else?

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I like the bassline in it, chords are nice to hear. Ambient synths are ok too. I'm not that fond of piano's and the lead you used, but overall it sounds pretty well, very relaxing!

And that kick is to be improved too i think, it's too ploppy at the beginning.

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Thanks Jay M for the suggestions. I'll work on the kick sound in the future.

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hey i like this song. im listening to it now.
although i think i disagree with dj-sean; i like the kick. i actually think the kick does the rest of the song justice.
i do like the sound effects and the interesting percs a lot.
its a nice chill song.
also, the quality of production is amazing. i love the bassline.

Thank on your comments djHollen

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