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This tambourine percussion is too loud i think, grabs my first attention.
You use an effect, sort of laser beam, which deserves some attention too, sounds too flat. Maybe some delay or reverb can help (but my own sounds are sometimes too reverb'ish, so...)
Kinda funny, i thought i heard a bassline off key and far too loud in this song... but it was still there when I pressed Winamp's stop button... Seems my neighbour above me is playing TOO fucking loud, going to tear down his installation...
Anyways I think there's potential in this one, I like this lead sound in combination with the piano (normally I'd spit on piano's, but this is good!). Filtering gives it a good sound in my opinion, nice work. I like the chords, they're not as simple and shortcut as in many other trance-productions.
Give it some more attention, and listen to Nemesis, he gives more professional reviews and highlighted the things that need improvement and I agree . Very nice work done so far, tho!
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