This is a track I wrote that's got a lot of tragic history behind it that I won't get into because it's not my place to do so. All I can say is it is an interpretation of an accoustic guitar melody that a friend of mine wrote as sort of a requiem.

Honest feedback welcome, been working extremely hard on this for the past several weeks inbetween classes.

http://home.comcast.net/~dbogle/tim...al_128_clip.mp3

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great stuff mate, gettin played out tonite this is!

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really like you track it has great atmosphere it remainds me something but i dont know what really like melody keep it up

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Sweet stuff as always, pads/strings and guitar are ace!

The kick is atad too solid compared to the bass though I think. I feel the percs are a bit drowned as well after the climax...

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this is really nice man, the breakdown is gorgeous.

any chance of a version to play???

Can do, you want it on the ftp or msn?

BTW thanks for all the comments so far guys, apperciate it!

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Pretty nice pads, tho altogether it's a bit too blurry for my ears, maybe because of the reverb on it?
The kick sounds a bit ploppy, maybe beacause there's too less bass to back it up?

Rest is pertty mint!! Good work.

-Jay

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Originally posted by State of Matter Can do, you want it on the ftp or msn? BTW thanks for all the comments so far guys, apperciate it!

ive pm'ed you my msn

great melody, but that guitar(?) does not fit the track at all.. it does not blend well with the other sounds.

strings are great. just change the awful awful guitar

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Personal preference, I personally love the guitar sound and I'm gonna leave it. I appreciate the feedback though, thanks guys.

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2) MK-S - Illuminate (State of Matter Revival Mix)
3) Scarab - Vagabond (State of Matter Revival Mix)
4) Ferry Corsten & The Thrillseekers - Sublime (State of Matter Revival Mix)
5) State of Matter - Saving Icarus (Original Mix)

https://soundcloud.com/stateofmattermusic

Mint track there mate..

Really like the melody.

wow... are you putting out remix packs?
i need a new hobby at the moment...

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