Hey, I just finished of this track.. this should be the final version..

it kinda reflects my own producing style, and what I am personally trying to make..

Subtle presents Subtara - Maranjana (original mix) (right click dl)

so I kinda got to finish this track.. suggestions are welcome still.. as Im not quite sure its the done deal yet!!

share, abuse, hate, like or love.. just let me know

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Last edited by Subtle on Jun-19-2005 at 12:24

...nice percs...but there´s some disturbing noise in the background...sounds like a vinyl...
...bass sounds cool...gives a really deep feeling to the track...
...some more elements like whoshes and so on would be nice in the buildup...
...wow, nice pad, i like the melody...reminds me of something...
...sound quality is quite good...but why have you cutoff everything above 16khz?

very nice track, dude!

The percussion is great as allways. The fx are really nice too. I like the clap/snare. The song is a bit too repetive imo. The track is very well produced.

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Originally posted by Klangzentrum ...nice percs...but there´s some disturbing noise in the background...sounds like a vinyl... ...bass sounds cool...gives a really deep feeling to the track... ...some more elements like whoshes and so on would be nice in the buildup... ...wow, nice pad, i like the melody...reminds me of something... ...sound quality is quite good...but why have you cutoff everything above 16khz? very nice track, dude!

thx for the comment m8, the disturbing noise is an additional bass.. (or more like the first intended bass) it kinda lacks a lot of whoosh and whiish.. I adjusted the cuttoff of the lead, guess it didnt help much..

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hi there!

nice tune!... as posted before, audio quality needs attention. I like the structure of the track, and the style, but maybe you can try to mute the percs in some parts to keep up the "fresh" of the track.


saludos!

after the drop when the beat comes in, it sort of just comes in suddenly. MAybe you could add like a snare roll or something to add some tension or something.

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Nice pads.
I didn't like the snare.
Actually really good pads.
Send me a remix pack.
Repeatitve but it's prog so it's good.
4/5

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I love the percs in this, very tribal.

The FX are nice and scary. Bass end is aggressive.

Synth sounds are solid. And I love those pads.

Nice work, not much I can fault that hasn't already been said.

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anth_on_e: thx.. I should definitely get some tension there.. its coming way too sudden..


doreemix: thx for that tip.. its pretty straight on those percussions

State Of matter: thanks.. glad u like it..

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very cool sounds and effects you've got there

the mix seems to be a bit too bright, though. the track needs more low end

and as mentioned before, some whooshes would be nice to lead us into and out of the breakdown.

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There are a lot of pads in here. In the first few minutes it doesn't seem to fit together all too well.
The fx don't seem to be under control, and they are a bit simple. But it seems you made them yourself and thats a good thing.
Now the break is there a bit too sudden.
The lead synth coming here is ok, and so is the melody.
Overall the percs are pretty good.

Overall not bad, I began to like the track after the break. Keep up!

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Hey Suble.

Bass & drums are sweet.

the distorted gurgle sound throughout this song is hypnotising!

3:50 this emotional melody that come in is a refreshing change.

5:15 the drums catch me by surprise. I think you need to build up to the percussion with a drum roll or a beat that fades in. Background drums may also add to emotion & build it up more before the bass drum kicks in.

the track finishes very nicely.

Great work on this track suble. Very trancy. Im impressed by you drum layers.

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