Hi,

Finally I have just given up getting this track released.

This is more than one year old track. Anyway any feedbacks are welcome.

If someone would like to include in his/her set or wants to make a remix of that, then pls pm me.

Enjoy it.

Fineart - Polaris (Original Mix)

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solid stuff, mate

too bad the label withdrawed from the release

will play this in my next couple of sets for sure,

keep up the excellent work,

cheers,

Peter

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It's loud - for sure. Nice, deep bass. Though I dislike that piano-sound. Too computerish. Make it more smooth. Wow, when the percussian hits in, they sound very good. I like the bass-synth you've used. Really crisp!! The melody is kinda chilidsh though... Hehe

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whats with you guys and those pianos...

dont like the piano.. i like the pads though.. love the acid.. hmm.. the Armin chord sound.. acid and pads are real cool

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ok I have listened to this... It sounds good, quality is good, good sounds, I like the choirs... intro is good, dont like the piano sound and overall of this track - it is nothing special...it can be also good tune, good fx... but try to change BD and make the rythm more progressive, progressive bassline... etc. I like the acidizes phased sample in the groove of the rythm... but this sounds like it is not done... so make on it and it will be good tune...

Hey hey.

I think the choir is a bit too loud.
The bass is quite flat and the kick is short, I'd use a longer one.
I like the pluck, but maybe there's a tad too much delay on it.
Now that lead synth is very flat as well, could use some beefage, a slight phaser or something. Or give it more lowend, more body, that might be it.
Percs are not really special..

Hm well these are things I come up with listening to it, the mastering and EQ overall sound pretty good, it's just many tiny points I would change before trying to release it...

Keep it up.

-Jay

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Personally, nothing struck me as special to this track. It is well-produced, but it lacks that extra something that would stand out to a label-manager who gets hundreds of demos a week.

It is well produced, but try incorporating some new original ideas to this and make it stand out more, and you should have a good chance of getting signed.

been waiting to hear this for awhile you! ill download and listen over the weekend. cheers

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Excellent track!

Chris

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choir intro is good, bit too much piano. might want to drop parts of it out or drop some notes (no one seems to do this yet) to tease the audience.

i actually like the bassline and the way its setup, but it would be interesting to also have a more progressive sounding mix as well, as buro suggested (although everyone seems to be going prog, progtrance, prog house these days and trance needs an injection from some new talent and some new explorations to revitalize the genre).

could use some more effects on the main section of the track, and used in the right spots, can make the track more interesting and longer lasting.

lots of various comments, the only solid feedback to change so far is the piano. so its up to you what you decide to do steve!

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greg corbett | schedule | party107.com tracklists
slyxster | johnson & corbett | deepwav3 |
Progressive Transmission on Party107.com every Wed @ 5pm PST (8pm EST / 1am GMT)
Pacific Coast Frequencies on Danceradioglobal.com - trance every 1st Tues @ 4pm PST (7pm EST / 12midnight GMT)
Upcoming Gigs: none scheduled
Past gigs:
Phoenix Echo Aug 8th, 2009,
Believe @ Redroom, Feb and May 2009
Gareth Emery Boat Party - Aug 8th, 2008
Phoenix Outdoor Party - Aug 16th, 2008

piano doenst sound very good over here
nice choirs quite cute

> at 1:30 the mood changes completely, it sounds like its a different track.

> the pad playing in the second part is a bit too loud imo, perhaps it could go more in the back of the mix. nice acid line, this is good melodic stuff, but i really think the intro doesnt go AT ALL with it. there also are some little mixing issues.

globally i like it


static blue

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