Hey Peter,

I really like this man. Nice chill out ASOT kinda trance. Great effects in it. It does need some eq-ing. Maybe make the bassline more rollin so it get's a little more drive. Maybe an extra arp or lead melodie? And the strings more to the background? Man If you've finished it maybe i could do a remix?
Keep it up!! Great job.

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whoa coming along nicely ^-^
sounds really good, i wish i could do things like that lol.
just need to do it up like you said and you'll have one pimping track man

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cant give no pointers as its still early stages and your still working on it those strings/pads are so atmospheric and really fucking good hurry up and finish it .

hey Peter nice Piece great sounds and stuff but its sound like its ripped from a set , i mean hmm maybe too much compressor
no wide Stereo image...
try to fix it...altuogh good job!

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I recognize this This is the same track as "Mayflower" Just Mayflower is far more finished.

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Nice melody Peter, it's a nice track to work on and finish. Pay some extra attention to the percussion, kick and bass, they lack quite some power. The kick and bass need far more low end and the percs could use a layer or to for more drive.

Good luck ma man

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beautiful stuff man

try and tweak up the low end

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mate great fxs nice melody, good flow, nice bassline and great strings.. I always look at deepest side of tune and I am looking for emotions.. and this is very good emotional track.. good job.. keep this up.

Nice work although the bass lacks low frequencies.

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good stuff mate. Nice chilly trance. Im waiting for the full version :P

- like mentioned, work with the bass. make it clearer and punchier
- i'd use a different, maybe even more live sounding instrument for those background strings. or maybe a nice full pad and layer them even more in the buildup
- i think you need a leady melody, or some sort of hook
- hats/percs need more attention.
- overall the tracks sounds nice, but seems to lack a main hook and attention to small pieces

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