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Pads are nice compared to the percs coming later. It's to minimal and very thin. You need to boost the effective frequencies of the instruments and cut the parts they don't need to be in. The kick is to far away, it needs more power an more precense. Try to layer a kick on it with a lot of tick, or just a hat on top. There is drive in there because of the short percs, that's good.
Nice track to remix of course, has a lovely melody. The string-like lead you use is a bit too wet, too much reverb/delay. A bit less of that helps clarity too. The bell sound you use for another melody is cool, but can be put more upfront. And yeh, you'd better fill up the breaks a bit 
Good effort overall, I hope these comments are of any help.
-Jay
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