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Nomen Nescio
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Deventer
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Hey mate,
Just listened to the track. Totally love it melodicwise. The break is gorgeous. I was hoping for a bit more prominent lead though. But the atmosphere in this track is lovely.
I also agree with 3d signal that the beat sounds a bit empty and the open hi hat is a bit too loud. Solutions for that are very simple,you need to notch up the bass. It is way too soft and does not glue with the beat. Perhaps even you should use another more prominent bass sound. If you'd do that you would get a track of the likes of Lolo. Also the kickvolume could perhaps a bit softer and eq'ed better and the hihat could be lowered in volume. But these are all just mix down details.
Other than that this is a superb track.
Cheers!
Nomen nescio
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Oct-23-2005 19:47
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Jay M
Connecting dots...

Registered: Jan 2004
Location: The Hague, Holland
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Hm there's a lot of kick and hihat in here. Not all too pleasant. Kick has too much around that 150 hz (guessing now tho), try too peak it around 80 and watch the volume of it. Hats gained too much too, there's clipping here and there.
Break. Pads hurt my ears dude, way too much resonance. Melody is a nice one, nice work on the piano. Great sound at end of the break. After the break the melody gets too few room to play, its hihat and kick all over the place, too bad m8, you have to give that some more attention. Variety it the percs could do some good too.
Good structure in the track, could use a counter melody here and there, but first get the levels right I'd say Good luck.
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