Just about finished my latest track that I've been working on and off for the duration of about 4 months. I'm just adding some final touches to it and putting some more work in the mixing and fx and some tweaks here and there.
Would appreciate to have any constructive feedback if you have any, thanks
(Note: I've put a 1 second silence at the start of each minute, but hopefully, you won't be too bothered by that)
Enjoy!
Jul-08-2006 03:05
Aquarian
king of no pants
Registered: May 2005
Location: Laval, Quebec
Re: [Prog] J.L. - Lunar Rhythm
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Originally posted by J.L.
Just about finished my latest track that I've been working on and off for the duration of about 4 months.
I admire your patience. The longest I've spent on a single track consistently is a little over a week. After that I tend to either finish my projects or abandon them completely.
Listening now.
Interresting how it doesn't seem to follow the traditional empty percussions intro that we're so used to.
Kick sounds a bit too loud in my headphones.
Sounds good so far. But the mix sounds a bit muddy. The mixing sounds a bit weird. Almost like two tracks were being mixed together at times.
At 3:00 now. It's starting to sound a bit repetitive. Needs more contrast and movement to keep things interresting.
Overall, some good elements, good rhythm, good atmosphere, but the mix sounds a bit muddy, and I didn't like how the whole track just feels like a giant introduction. It seems to never move on.
Jul-08-2006 04:25
Jay M
Connecting dots...
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: The Hague, Holland
Hi JL,
Nice percussion in this one, try to give them just a tad more brightness, just a little high end should do it.
Melodies are ok. Enough sounds around to call this track finished.
The break has some floaty pad in it, needs to be more defined, pretty muddy business going on now.
Oh and I'm really waiting for the hook lead in the second break but its not coming, thats a shame. Maybe fix that!
Registered: Apr 2006
Location: Europe, far from the Ocean
Hi J.L.
Good positive music, I can listen it for hours. Good sounds and their arrangement.
In my opinion there is some issues:
- lack of high frequences, maybe you mixed it in headphones?
- sounds in the mix are like illegible, imho they need some partial equalization, maybe compression/maximizing, maybe some harmonic excitement or something like that.
