the synth in the beginning needs more FX.. needs bass.. needs bass REALLY BAD.. a nice sine bass would do wonders for this track.. get some crazier percussion in there too..
hmm ok, i'll try adding more bass. im content with the percussion though, didnt want anythign crazy for it.
Mar-23-2004 03:52
BassAngel
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Sheffield, UK
Like the name - really creates a lot of images in my mind.
Well, not quite sure what to say cos there isn't really any low end - very avante garde in what you are doing. Not sure I am following it though. It's like there are some nice ideas in some of the sequences you are playing, you can hear a tune in there somewhere but it doesn't strike me as finished.
I'm thinking like that Jam and Spoon - follow me tune would work really well for this idea, obviously not ripping it off but that kind of vibe.
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Mar-23-2004 11:21
ezbeats
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Seattle, USA
sounded like you had some nice sounding effects with the synths.. but overall a bit 'bland' for the level that most people on here try to attain. buty, if it were my track i had produced, id be proud none the less . KEEP ON TRUCKIN!!!
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Mar-24-2004 19:11
Elujin
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2004
Location: Washington DC
heh thx bro.
to the ther people, im not really a huge fan of bass, so most of my songs are really high-treble like and I try adding echo's and underlying treble harmonies to substitute for bass.
Mar-25-2004 21:32
alanzo
The Equalizer Womanizer
Registered: Sep 2003
Location: Boston, MA
quote:
Originally posted by Elujin
heh thx bro.
to the ther people, im not really a huge fan of bass, so most of my songs are really high-treble like and I try adding echo's and underlying treble harmonies to substitute for bass.
in an electronica song, there is no substitute for bass...
. KEEP ON TRUCKIN!!!
