I finished it a couple of days ago. Let me know what you think of it.

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Nice proggy track, very good production quality.
Maybe the bass deserves more loudness. After a while track is a drag a bit, not much variety. Some synths sound a bit simple.

Don't get me wrong, this is top stuff. Good work, lots of people dig this!

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this is very good! awesome produced.

now from 4.05 you add another lead on top the current one, thing is its very soft, and thats to bad, since it gives nice feel with the base.

i think thats why it sounds a bit repeatative.

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very nice track, i agree it does get a bit redundant after a while, maybe add a contrasting section that complements that melody u repeat alot. but, overall solid production

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Thanks for the feedback guys! Anybody got a suggestion to which label I could send it to? Digweed will get a copy when he plays in Stockholm this weekend.

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I agree. A bit repeditive.. The bass lead is a bit too "sharp" per say. The brassness could definitly be lowerd a couple of noches to give it a more sharper sound..

Overall, I think it's pretty good. With a bit of changes it would make it much better. But it's still produced well as it is.

JaY

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Nice track! Love the progressive feel of this. Although it becomes a bit repetitive over time, which was said before. Maybe the thing to remedy this is to build up the track a bit slower.
Now after one minute or so you immediately introduce a lot of the track elements. If you build this up a bit slower you get much less repetition and the track will be way better!

As for the label, why not try Bedrock? Seems definitely up their alley.

Good luck!

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I like this track. Just my style.

Nice listen, contains many Yunus style ingrediants. I think the kick is weakest thing about the, if you can boost that, it will help the track alot.

Good luck,

Burnski