Not bad at all! Although not spectacular by your standards.

The tune sounds fairly muddy although it could well be the fault of the bitrate (grrrr!). Melody is fairly good although secondary melody doesn't really stick with me... I'm sure those synths would sound really sweet in a *cough* higher quality sample.

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Its ok, was abit dissapointed though. You can do alot better i think.
I wish you had posted a 192 so i could comment on the sound. Seems like the bass gets drowned, or maybe its just muddy, hard to tell. So goes for the clap. Well you went for a Tiesto style, and i dont like him so , no wonder. The melody works pretty good.

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I hope not to hear this one in a club, 112 kbps is far too low. Muddiness all over, why don't you post a better quality so we can try to point how to improve clarity? I think you should work on that..

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thanx for replies
wasnt expecting it to be so bad
o well, i geuss its not ur style hehe
the bass is supposed to be muddy like that,
and since u all complained i updated it to 128 X 44
wont make much difference but anwyays...

hope u change ur mind

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Hi there!

I can surely see this track work in a club, allthough it needs some work I think.

I like the build-up at the start. nice breakdown at 1.12. allthough at 1.16 the climax is a bit of a disappointment to me, with the high melody line gone. the part you use now after the small break now, should be put after the high melody is done playing (after about 32 measures or something). not saying this is the way to go for you, but it would work for me I think

ill dl and give'r a listen ron. i think luke terry wants 192 kbps min. samples though... didn't he warn you in another thread?

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sorry about the shit sample dunno what i was thinking hehe
anyways were remaking the second melody on the buildup a little, since people werent so pleased
this will take a while hehe, a tough song to crack...
we'll update u when we make somthing good..
in the mean time, be ready for another more melodic style, hopefully it wont disapoint u

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Sunquest is there any reason why you give samples such low bitrate?

rule is 160min..is it bandweith or online space :S?

the melody i liked, and i think it can work in a club if you spice up the production a bit, more fx and tricky automation etc..

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