like what you did with the vocals. the symbol clash is too simple. needs another layer on the low end, a repeating bass wave. needs more variation on the phrasing marks to keep it interesting. could use more build up, stretched out buildup. 2:38, missing a beat or two to complete that nice little spot in the track.
i like this though, it has a lot of potential. i love the infusion remix, i got a friend to drop it and it sounds so phat in a club.
the 3:20ish, the sound there, expand that, play with it, try having some more fun with the bassline and bass/kick progression during the breakdown. stick some of that sound at the beginning or maybe at the 1 min mark for like a bar, to tease the listener that the track is going to change up later on for a bit.
give this some more work for sure!
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greg corbett | schedule | party107.com tracklists
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Progressive Transmission on Party107.com every Wed @ 5pm PST (8pm EST / 1am GMT)
Pacific Coast Frequencies on Danceradioglobal.com - trance every 1st Tues @ 4pm PST (7pm EST / 12midnight GMT)
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Past gigs:
Phoenix Echo Aug 8th, 2009,
Believe @ Redroom, Feb and May 2009
Gareth Emery Boat Party - Aug 8th, 2008
Phoenix Outdoor Party - Aug 16th, 2008
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