still need more work but i dont got the time currectly...
-1:00 dist dunno how it cames there
pleaseee give me some feedback about this track..
thanks
Jan-21-2005 12:14
Jay M
Connecting dots...
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: The Hague, Holland
Kick sounds oh so familiar.
Nice acid lead. A tad high end would do it good tho.
Overall pretty full sounding.
Percs sound a bit static tho, have another look at those.
Nice strings in the brak, they fill it up nicely.
Bass isn't really clear, try to give it more body! And watch out that it doesn't interfere with the kick.
thanks!
too bad it seems that this is gonna be the only comment..
Jan-21-2005 19:50
tylerc
wannabe ballaz
Registered: Nov 2004
Location: MN USA
wow, i really like this a lot. i like all the cool distorted synths, lots of sweet sounds. i'm not really sure if i like the synth at that break at 1:00, but its pretty quick. the synth after that is
damn. i love this. the only bad thing i could say about it is that it seems you've distorted a lot of your percussion too, like your snare and ride cymbal. i think its just a bit much, its good to still have some clean sounds in the mix.
Great work, I'd definately like to hear a full version.
Jan-22-2005 23:35
jahala
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2003
Location: Somewhere
Nice idea, dont like the overall sound of the production - but i think youre on the right track.. doesnt sound like everything else, which is really nice..
Produce more, get more experience - and i think you could make some pretty decent bangin' tracks
- J.
Jan-23-2005 04:15
jahala
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2003
Location: Somewhere
Nice idea, dont like the overall sound of the production - but i think youre on the right track.. doesnt sound like everything else, which is really nice..
Produce more, get more experience - and i think you could make some pretty decent bangin' tracks
- J.
Jan-23-2005 04:15
pho mo
tropical bliss
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Darwin
Nice work A.Y!!
The main lead completely rips! When it comes in at 1:14 is a complete dancefloor mayhem
I'd love to hear the rest of the tune, see how everything flows and where it all leads.
The bass end could definitely be tweaked, give it some crunch in a compressor or whatnot. The rest is great, Jay M said tho, a little bit of high on the main lead would make it soar. The kick is great
OOH MY GOD!! The main lead it sounds 3D! It just comes out of the speakers and grabs you! This is awesome. I normally like the more uplifting melodic trancetracks but dude, this is a floorfiller!!
I would very much like to hear the whole track. Maybe it might get a bit too repetitive. But this track really has the energy and as you can see this is not the only respons you have had so far!
Cheers!
Jan-23-2005 20:07
DJ-Kreing^^
Syncope
Registered: Jul 2001
Location: rothland
The first part of the tune (till about 1:00) sounds really mint. But I didn’t like the second part that much…over all the sound quality isn’t that good, but you have some great ideas and great sound there, it just needs some more polishing I guess.
@ 0:24 its sound amazing, very original and carzy sounding lead.
Well done ahi…
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dunno how it cames there
