Hi,
I've been working on this track for a while. I can't say it's finished, but it is close to finished. It needs to be mastered and it might needs some little changes.
Originally posted by DJ Twenty
Track starts of good but i aint keen on the kick drum, needs a bit more punch.
EQ and that is out but thats because u aint mastered it yet
Synth's sounded a bit weak for vanguard? maybe need a bit more punch.
Song gets nice after the breakdown, kinda like chilled out uplifting trance.
Overall though keep the work up on it and who knows!
Thanks, first of all, for your reply!
The only thing I did with Vanguard are the pads. The lead synth is a software JP-8000-version. Can't get more punch in that I'm afraid. The Lead-Sine is PolyIblit.
Anyway, I changed it a bit.
What have I done exactly:
quote:
- 2nd basstone lower.
- Bass some more depth and decay.
- Bit less compression on the kick/hihats; better climax.
- More FX, like some little snare-rolls and some little hihat FXs.
- Full new snare-roll.
- Kick a bit deeper and harder.
- Clap bit better for the climax.
- CHH on the kick little less velocity and better on the kick.
- Some more little rests, makes it less boring :P
- 2nd climax deleted.
- Chorus on that lead-sine.
- Pad little softer; better in the climax, gives it a bit more strength.
So, I uploaded this new version. It's available under the same link. Hope you guys like it!
You think it's worth to try some labels with this track?
Well, in 4 days time, I got 1 reply that helped me. Are you guys afraid of reviewing it? I don't understaind. I reviewed other people's music, so that couldn't be the problem. The server is very fast, you don't have to log in or anything.
Ok, I realy don't understand, I always give giant reviews, and I got 112 views, and just ONE review (thanks DJ Twenty!!), bit unfair maybe?
Are you all lazy people? If someone makes a good track everyone reviews it with: 'Great track' and stuff. But you are too lazy to help somebody when a track is not that good.
I'll give the track some small improvements (also see CC) and then I will try to finish a new track! Dunno if it's gonna be a remix or another own track, depents on my ideas.
I like it
Some of the elements really remind me of Yahel productions, the bassline, ... use of percussion I think the kick is good the way it is and the build-up is rock solid.
Overall, a great production. Still think it's a little on the boring side, but it sure has great potential Maybe expand the melody with a little extra, a wider string section or something!
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