whaddup everyone ?

i'm workin on a new trance track...take a listen

any feedback would be cool at this point...thanks

http://www.sitesled.com/members/djherman/DJ%20-%20HERMAN/So%20Alive.mp3


paace

Last edited by djherman on Jul-28-2005 at 02:19

Those vocorders were cheesy as heck... I might take a moment to say that this whole trance was cheesy... but that's a given if you are producing vocal trance. Not that it's a bad thing, just not something I'm a big fan of.

Something was wrong with the vocals, they seemed apart from the mix - maybe if you added reverb with touches of delay at times. Definately needed reverb that would have been a large improvement - mabye the same amount of reverb that you applied to the leads and compressed, who knows.

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hey i like this... a lot.. the vocoder reminds me of the nu italo disco tracks i used to listen to in the late 90s...

can't find anything wrong with this production although the breakdown with the girl could have better pads than that one note pad... haha omg i love the way the pitch goes down on the voice and it ends in some cheesy triplet thing.

Overall the track reminds me of something DJs@work or Brooklyn Bounce would make...

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Instrumentation sounds great, but the vocals reach a level of cheese even beyond Alice Deejay.

naw i'd take the vocals over the instrumentation... plus the vocals would sound better had the autotune not been so tight.

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thanks for listening

gonna add in a nice break pad instead of the cello for the break....

appreciate the comments-


peace

and don't lose that vocalist.. she's really good

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am i the only one posting tracks with vocals...maybe this is the wrong site for that ? ?

I dunno man, this song is pretty good...but i really can't get past these vocals. Its a good track besides that...good energy

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naw... we like vocals... it's that this is more of an uplifting, progressive trance forum... but you posted europop vocals.. maybe thats' why people don't like it here.

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that makes sense...i will post more progressive heavier trance next time....appreciate the advice....
are there any other sites where i could post tracks like this one with vocals ? ?

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forum/s...threadid=271859

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