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I noticed I never posted this here. It's my first 100% Cubase track (Cloudland was first but that was half Fruity still), made a few months ago. I worked it through just a bit. Some elements I would do different now, but 'I can't be arsed' to redo the whole track.

If you're browsing this forum longer may know the original, it's a 'TA classic'. Can be found in TA Unite 3. If you want the full, I don't know, just ask or so. Dunno if it's cool cause the original is not released (yet).

Enough talk, grab it here:

Elude - Purgatory (Yarune Remix) www cut

Please leave comments, thx!

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Last edited by Jay M on Nov-08-2005 at 17:12

although i ve been mainly into prog recently...

a nice full sounding track with a nice drive from those drums.

its a bit textbook, but very pro sounding.

break is quite enjoyable...

overall the melody doesnt quite do it for me cos its a bit obvious in synth selection and overall composition.

maybe make parts a bit more minimal so the main fuller bits have more of an impact?

a well made piece. but doesnt have that 'wow' factor for a uplifting trance track...

rich

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Hi Yarune! Always enjoyed your tunes so I thought I'd give this one a listen.

Nice kick! That PWM-ish lead sounds just a tad bit too loud, could try cutting the lower frequencies a little more.. Bass could be a little fatter too! Everything's flowing along nicely otherwise. Breakdown sounds nice, but perhaps just a tad bit empty; and the climax could be a little more explosive too. The saw lead sounds very V-Station.. I don't know what it is but there's something that I don't like about it. :/ Try playing around with it!

Sorry if I sound a little harsh, don't mean to. The track is overall very nice and driving, mix is pretty tight too. I'm sure this will be awesome once you tweak it some more! Good luck!

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Originally posted by sharvax Hi Yarune! Always enjoyed your tunes so I thought I'd give this one a listen. Nice kick! That PWM-ish lead sounds just a tad bit too loud, could try cutting the lower frequencies a little more.. Bass could be a little fatter too! Everything's flowing along nicely otherwise. Breakdown sounds nice, but perhaps just a tad bit empty; and the climax could be a little more explosive too. The saw lead sounds very V-Station.. I don't know what it is but there's something that I don't like about it. :/ Try playing around with it! Sorry if I sound a little harsh, don't mean to. The track is overall very nice and driving, mix is pretty tight too. I'm sure this will be awesome once you tweak it some more! Good luck!

No review's great, thanks! i'm looking for these kind of reviews. It's just the track that's old, learned so much since, i just dont feel like chaning al the synths in this one.

Only the bass is V-station, saw you mean is Korg polysix, sound is not the best I agree.

Thanks guys!!

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Nice melodies in this one.
Melody wise this really kicks ass, it has a very evolving sound, very good on the ears and has lots of variation.

I don't know if this been mastered yet though, sounds a tad boxed, so I guess thats the thing that is missing now, proper eq:ing and mastering.

Good melodic synth piece

I noticed a small conflict in it btw, at 4:39 you have a minor and major chord at the same time.

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Originally posted by Drik Nice melodies in this one. Melody wise this really kicks ass, it has a very evolving sound, very good on the ears and has lots of variation. I don't know if this been mastered yet though, sounds a tad boxed, so I guess thats the thing that is missing now, proper eq:ing and mastering. Good melodic synth piece I noticed a small conflict in it btw, at 4:39 you have a minor and major chord at the same time.

Melody is why I remixed it, it's just great stuff from the original.

Mastering is done by myself, but I'm no sound engineer so that has for sure room for improvement. With eq-ing I've had some problems with the two lead synths and the gated strings. Do you have any tips how I could improve the way they are eq'ed....?

It's a bit odd yes at 4:38-.. I'll have a look to it next time I edit the track (dunno if that's gonna happen tho).

Thanks Drik.

Anyone else maybe?

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Hey Jay,

There's this hollow sounded synth in the background.. it's fucking cool! I love it.

Not sure if I like the synth for the main lead yet.. I need a few more listens. Right now it reminds me of early Perpetuous Dreamer stuff...

percs are top notch as always!

Tons of energy when you come out of the breakdown - that was well done.

I never heard the original but I enjoyed your remix - thanks for sharing,
Trev

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Bring in that main melody in the first opening part a bit more craftily and it won't seem so out of place.

Good bridge and build.

Nice work.

Yareune, good stuff, nice and analogue, percussion was great too...

Its wierd, i did a remix of this a while ago but started to redo it 2 nights ago...

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Originally posted by Terry Barker Yareune, good stuff, nice and analogue, percussion was great too... Its wierd, i did a remix of this a while ago but started to redo it 2 nights ago...

Yep I heard a sample of that a while ago. Don't forget to put it up here when you're done

Thanks.

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Yeah was a few years now lol...
I will post full up nps...

Nice work Jay

Nice Remix Yarune

I like the Echo Feeling to give to the melody, Sounds very nice Overall =)

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