Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
Kind of cool idea :p
I actually wanted to wait until the entire track was finished.. but here's a sneak peak I think its really cool and it would tear down a floor!! I dont mean to brag but I think it really could
sample of 1:12, technoïsh..
it certainly would work the dancefloor well. the whole thing sounds great. drive superb. but i think you want a more defined and slamming kick for it. it is a fred baker style track. and would stand up against a pro track as long and the kick is shit hot and the mastering is good.
keep workin on it and please send me a rmx pack of it so i can make a version and be a rmxer for when it gets signed
make sure you keep the track simple and dont try too much with it. the rawness is a vertue i think
rich
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Jun-21-2006 12:25
PutBoy
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2004
Location: LA (Landskrona)
Hey, I decided to take a listen to this, despite the topic title.
(I was listening to the Steve Angello & Sebastian Ingrosso Essential Mix. So it better be worth the interuptance.)
The kick doesn't sit where it should. Yes, the white noise lead (it's sounds like that anyways) is of 'tearing the floor'-quality maybe, but the kick and the bass is too weak...
Yeah, I think you on something here. Keep working!
Akia
Jun-21-2006 14:42
RickyM
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Registered: Sep 2004
Location: Northern Ireland
Hey Takkra
I think it's cool sounding, but the white-noise lead takes over the whole track.
Bassline is quite cool as well, but gets lost by the lead sounds.
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Jun-21-2006 16:31
Jay M
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Registered: Jan 2004
Location: The Hague, Holland
Hm title is misleading, don't get too enthousiastic about your own stuff until you got some decent opinions on it. I understand you want it to sound big. But the lead has too much noise in it, sound muddy all the way. The reverb or decay on it which obsorbs the lead later on sounds very metallic. The bass sounds too 97-ish, needs to be deeper and the kick needs more power and presence. Not impressed by the percs too. In my opinion the melody isnt stoer, which was your intention seeing the music style. Try to make it more clear, more banging and work on the quality of the sounds!
not bad, but the kick and bassline needs to be perfect on these kind of tracks, and i feel its not tight enough.. the bass and kick clashes with eachother.. but with some more work i dont doubt ull tear some club apart
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: Nijmegen, The Netherlands
yea I see everybody's point..
thanks alot for pointing the bass/kick out, that was the thing i was looking for..
it's just when I had it ready I was so friggin happy I overreacted hehe
(leuke omschrijving trouwens Jay "its not stoer hehe ")
anyway I see alot of good advice here (god I love this board hehe)
and im glad most you all liked the idea !!
(en.. jayM had je niet ff kunnen luisteren naar Solarkeyz..? die is helemaal af en fatsoenlijk getweaked naar mijn gevoel..)
I think its really cool and it would tear down a floor!! 
I dont mean to brag but I think it really could 
!!1
