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[Uplifting] Static Blue - Under The Sea (sample) (pg. 2)
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| DjLiMZ. |
| This is awesome from the eminds me of some pvd tune at the start :P, love the piano synths are awesome and stand out as they should melody is really uplifting. The thing that could be tweak ever so slightly is the clap could hardly hear it on my speaker (note could prolly be my speakers). good luck with the labels :D. |
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| staticblue |
thanks alot !!
i'm glad you guys seem to like it :) i'll follow your advices and tweak a few things.
peace,
static blue |
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| DjCommisad |
sup static. main sections can use some tweaking. its a bit thin imo.
piano and strings are nice, but the breakdown sounds out of step a bit to me, a bit chaotic in the sense that it feels like the elements are working against each other, and also they make the breakdown seem rushed. however, the positive is, its not some huge long breakdown that kills the floor so that's always a bonus!
tweak the clap, beef the bass. i'd say tweak the strings volume in the main sections (like what you've done so far, where its not all one level the whole way, but do a bit more) and i'd take the breakdown piano, and go robert myles - children with it for the first half of the break, drop a few notes to tease.
otherwise, sounding good. its different, and that's what i like about it. lately been getting bored with trance. :thepirate |
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| Timothy |
Great to hear something new of you! ( your carl b - all day remix gets played alot on my ipod :p )
The piano is very good in the breakdown. The synths are very nice too especially the Pads/choirs. I think it's a great start to a very good track. Adding small details can make this track really stand out cause it sounds a bit too basic. Good luck with signing this if it's finished cause it's really good |
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| Takkra |
...I feel high...
wow man.. this is absolutely thé stuff :D amazing..
I cant say anythings else anymore.. ive listened 6 times in a row and still enjoying it, god.. :D!! |
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| alexpea |
| Such nice style!!! Both laidback and energic at the same time! The pianorolls in the background fits soooo well in here!!! :whip: :D Melody is beautiful! I really like this one! And the kickdrum is perfect, man!!! Seriously, this is banging :D :D :D |
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| Jay M |
Nice track so far m8. Pluck at start sounds a bit loud here.
Percs are mint. Very cool vox pads in break. Nice lead arp. Maybe try and thinken some sounds here and there, but I presume it'll all be taken care of nearing completion. Mix sounds pretty clear, good work! |
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| staticblue |
| wow thanks guys :) |
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| StanVoid |
nice bass/kick combination and pluck synths, although could do with a bit more originality (all those sounds are pretty common nowadays).
the breakdown is awesome, with the piano standing out the best. Melody is pretty nice, nothing too catchy though I'm afraid. It's got nice chords and a nice melody, but nothing I can make stick in my head. You do have the right elements though, just think more 'outside' the box i guess =)
best of luck!
Stan. |
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| gerrycueto |
when I saw the title, I expected a stupid trance mix of Sam Wright's Under The Sea from the Disney movie, The Little Mermaid, but when I hear I was glad it wasn't. :)
The beat is powerful and the breakdown is very great... man that lead is pure ownage, gives Phynn a run for his money... and the buildup is omg i die amazing... if I had a best tracks posted on Amateur Production Forum list, this one would top it.
I also noticed people pointing out flaws I couldn't find, did you update this track since you posted it by any chance?
And to the guy who couldn't find anything catchy about it, come on, you don't hear melodies like the main lead everyday.
It's a shame to see great tracks be underrated on TA, and then tracks that sound just like every other trance song... yeah I'm looking at you mr Carl B - All Day (nothing personal, dude)... are like the biggest thing to hit the boards with like a 1000 replies. |
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| pho mo |
| quote: | Originally posted by gerrycueto
It's a shame to see great tracks be underrated on TA, and then tracks that sound just like every other trance song... yeah I'm looking at you mr Carl B - All Day (nothing personal, dude)... are like the biggest thing to hit the boards with like a 1000 replies. |
Dude, I guess the listeners on TA and Armin Van Buuren are all wrong, whereas Gerry Cuerto is right? dude! :haha: |
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