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[Uplifting] Static Blue - Under The Sea (sample) (pg. 4)
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| Dave West |
| First class stuff. Just a bit too similar to Chicane's "Offshore". |
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| staticblue |
cheers :)
Col, thanks for being honest.
Dave, thanks for pointing this out, i wasn't aware of this so i'll have a listen to the chicane track. |
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| Luke Terry |
quality stuff mate.
i agree with wim + give the bass an extra dimension, maybe an acid or something too.
would definately love to get the full version + i'm sure you will have no bother getting this signed at all :)
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| Kaveh |
| I really like the melody in this one, so uplifting =) only thing I was thinking of was that the bass is a little bit too simple.. throw in some additional bass and it'll be great! good luck with it :] |
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| PEZ68 |
Well produced as a lot of people already told you. (the bass is indeed too simple though).
But this track is just plenty of clichés et de déjà entendu (especially the piano part). I have the feeling I've already heard that track 10 times before although it's the first time I'm listening to it. Too standard'ish for my ears |
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| MK-S |
Good track. That first synthline in the sample sounds a bit to harsh to me, could do with some more reverb or something. The break is good, as is the build up. Everything is fundamentally sound.
As mentioned, it's originality that is lacking here. It's not memorable, and it's all most definitely been done before.
But that's not necessarily a bad thing per se, you've mastered "the sound". Now use your imagination to build upon this and create something really special. :) |
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| The Drow |
nice plucks.
the piano is good. Try to give it more wetness.
I don't like the lead very much.
Everything is too dry imo.
5/10 |
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| music2dance2 |
| Superb mate I dont know what else to say except I await to hear the full version. I love the piano and the arp to, how do you guys go about making such great soundings arps? |
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| staticblue |
cheers guys
thanks for being honest,again !
music2dance2 : for the arps ?? mostly luck
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| music2dance2 |
| quote: | Originally posted by staticblue
cheers guys
thanks for being honest,again !
music2dance2 : for the arps ?? mostly luck
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So you just mess about until you get summat that sounds right? |
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| staticblue |
exactly :)
of course, i dont just draw random notes, but notes from the chords of my track ;) |
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| tylerc |
| sounds very nice man. you definitely have 'the sound' but as has been said, its a bit standard. i quite like the melody and your little piano runs in the break are beautiful. that bass definitely needs to be fattened up, its especially thin when it hits that second note in the progression. keep up the good work. |
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