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Self promo thread (pg. 20)
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| jåcë |
| dead link dave.. :conf: |
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| DaveBegic |
| sorry dude i took it down now cause i wanna start sending it off, ive gotten enough feedback. thanks tho |
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| Lew.D |
i just saw some of you are playing a bitta house atm, so here's my new techy-house tune i just finished. Whie i usually produce trance i thought i'd give it a go.
any form of feedback would be toooo appreciated!
size approx 8mb.. 160kbit quality
http://www.users.bigpond.net.au/lew...und%20(160).zip
thanks heaps! |
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| djway |
Hey,
Having a listen now. Thanx for posting the track.
Comments:-
Bass is WAY to over powering, EQ it down a bit. The bass kick also sounds like it's starting to distort on each kick. Whilst re-EQing the track bring the highs out further they sit way to low, and clean them up a bit.
The length of the track is pretty good for what it does, if anything perhaps the lead in is a bit long (perhaps 40-60 seconds), either that or more variety needs to be added at the start. After the break down, the way it all fits together is nice.
It's got a bit of an psy/acidy feel to it, not bad, it fits in very well with the vocoding.
Hope that's a start. It's a nice track, just needs a bit of polishing :)
--djway |
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| Lew.D |
| thanks for the tips mate. not the best at mastering so i will definitely have a look at changing it up based on your recommendations :haha: |
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| ONION |
| quote: | Originally posted by Lew.D
i just saw some of you are playing a bitta house atm, so here's my new techy-house tune i just finished. Whie i usually produce trance i thought i'd give it a go.
any form of feedback would be toooo appreciated!
size approx 8mb.. 160kbit quality
http://www.users.bigpond.net.au/lew...und%20(160).zip
thanks heaps! |
Bass: Drowns the entire track... and it sounds quite muddy... roll off at 300 Hz....
Vocal: pan it... and apply a DeEsser on it... its hissing a bit
Heres an awesome article on EQing:
http://www.dnbscene.com/articles.php?mode=display&id=79 |
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| ONION |
* Ok starts off well.... wouldnt have used that sound for the pad... however its spacey which is what you want in Trance... good stuff :)
* That lead however musically / sound is gay....
* bassline is alright
* break is crap ( overdone )
* chorus is crap ( overdone )
* u have some cool sounds... most of them i wouldnt use... dont know what VSTis or synths you are using
The overall mix sounds ok... keep working on your tune |
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| marsh |
| quote: | Originally posted by ONION
* Wouldnt have used that sound for the pad...
* That lead however musically / sound is gay....
* break is crap ( overdone )
* chorus is crap ( overdone )
* u have some cool sounds... most of them i wouldnt use...
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hey man - appreciate your honesty =]
I guess the comments i have quoted pertain to that beautiful thing about human nature - we all like different stuff. He he...
You seem fairly knowledgable, but perhaps your preference lies in an entirely different style. I've heard a snippet of yours which sounded cool - we gonna get an end result anytime soon? look forward if so!
cheers. |
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| ONION |
| quote: | Originally posted by marsh
hey man - appreciate you honesty =]
I guess the comments i have quoted pertain to that beautiful thing about human nature - we all like different stuff. He he...
You seem fairly knowledgable, but perhaps your preference lies in an entirely different style. I've heard a snippet of yours which sounded cool - we gonna get an end result anytime soon? look forward if so!
cheers. |
Good to know that you took my critism constructively : ) There is no mallice in what I say if I dont like something...
Keep producing, you will only get better... Ive seen huge improvements from guys on this board with the music they produce... : ) |
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| Paulie |
Dude...that fkn ownz...no !!! Fkn quality. |
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