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PhilB & Akia - Vocal trance (unfinished)
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| Akia |
Hey!
We need help with this! It is PhilB`s first vocal song so any suggestion on how to make it sounds better would appreciates very mutch! :gsmile: PhilB has produced everything and I have written the lyrics and singing it.
****Final version****
http://philb.jamura-music.com/audio/Knight_of_Dark.mp3
Thank you so mutch for your advices, suggestions and kind words, that has helped us a lot! :gsmile:
Akia & PhilB |
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| bidor |
nice tune, nice vocals, nice voice, i liked it 
any chance you could maybe post the lyrics?
thanks,
Bidor :) |
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| Lindo |
Listening now...
I like the track for the most part. Percussion is pretty sweet. I'm not really a fan of the bassline. Doesn't fit in my mind. The vocals need some tuning with autotune or something and they're also too loud in the mix. I think the track needs some filtering or something to give it a techy side or something. A pretty decent track, but could use some more work. Nice job though |
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| Akia |
Thank you guys! :gsmile: Here comes the lyrics:
Knight of Dark
You come with the North
you Knight of Dark
to catch a broken soul
you collect your cards.
Hunting in the moonshine
a shadow on the path
get scent of a hidden sore
nothin fails your sense.
Closen eyes
I can not see
I´m not an angel
and I will never be.
Give me love
fill my emptyness
a second in my life
and you own me at rest.
I just want to feel.
I just want to feel.
I just want to feel.
You come with the North
you Knight of Dark
to catch a broken soul
you collect your cards.
Waiting in the moonshine
I can hear your breath
creeping tight around
feel a heat in my chest.
A flame in the night. |
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| bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Akia
Thank you guys! :gsmile: Here comes the lyrics:
Knight of Dark
You come with the North
you Knight of Dark
to catch a broken soul
you collect your cards.
Hunting in the moonshine
a shadow on the path
get scent of a hidden sore
nothin fails your sense.
Closen eyes
I can not see
I´m not an angel
and I will never be.
Give me love
fill my emptyness
a second in my life
and you own me at rest.
I just want to feel.
I just want to feel.
I just want to feel.
You come with the North
you Knight of Dark
to catch a broken soul
you collect your cards.
Waiting in the moonshine
I can hear your breth
creeping tight around
feel a heat in my chest.
A flame in the night. |
nice lyrics.. now i heard you singing... but i would really like to hear some productions of yours! :gsmile: |
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| Akia |
| No, you wont :haha: ! |
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| bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Akia
No, you want :haha: ! |
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| Akia |
| Belive me, there is a reason why I not produce... ;) |
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| bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Akia
Belive me, there is a reason why I not produce... ;) |
why not? im sure your productions arent that bad! |
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| Akia |
| Haven´t produce anything att all, have no talent for that. I´m just a writer. |
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| bidor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Akia
Haven´t produce anything att all, have no talent for that. I´m just a writer. |
everyone isnt good in the beginning.. even dj's like tiesto, pvd, sasha etc.. why not try and play with some programs and see how good you really are in producing?! |
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| RickyM |
| quote: | Originally posted by Akia
Hey!
We need help with this! It is Montalrays` first vocal track so any suggestion on how to make it sounds better would appreciates very mutch! :gsmile: Montalrat has produced everything and I have written the lyrics and singing it.
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...47809F96E008D4A
Thanks!
Akia |
Hey Akia
I'll have a listen to this tommorrow, my connection is giving me at the minute, so downloading it now would be perilous ;)
So I'll review tommorrow. |
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