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PhilB & Akia - Vocal trance (unfinished) (pg. 6)
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| Akia |
Thank you Klangzentrum! I think youīve right about loader the vocal, especially the last part. :gsmile:
Thanks Sentinelproject, we will try that! :gsmile: |
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| LENG |
| after reading the 1st few pages in the thread, i guess there ain't much more left for me to say. it's an overall good track, tho i don't quite like the progression. there's basically 2 ways how u work around vocal tracks; 1) the vox is driving/melodic enough - any melody would work with it easily. e.g oceanlab-satellite 2) the vox is stale - needs a nice melody to drive the song. e.g. motorcycle-as the rush comes. so, if the vox is stale and the melody ain't catchy, the chances is pretty slim. as the rush comes has a cool bassline to drive the song and minimal lead synth but it does the job pretty well. |
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| Beatflux |
The vocals sound are too high and the melody isn't driving enough. The song remains in a perpetual state of 'ready to take off', but never doesn't melodically which is going to be really important.
:whip: :tongue2 |
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| Akia |
Thank you LENG and Beatflux for your opinions! :gsmile:
We have tryied to have the vocals a bit lower but it was hard to hear the lyrics then, I actually want to loader it even more..;) |
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| Subtle |
listening:
breakbeat in the beginning.. nice.. bass and kick works good.. vocal seems a little low in the mix.. the overall mix sounds good.. but im sorry, i dont think the vocals does anything to the track, they sound drowned.. maybe u should sing the vocals longer, vocals as in A, E ,I, O, U, to make them more "tonal" if u see what i mean. |
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| Akia |
| Thank you Subtle! Yeah, I see what you mean but Iīm not sure that would work, the tempo in the track is pretty high so I donīt think there is space for that. But I will try! :gsmile: |
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| Mr Rogers |
sounds like the synth in the beginning is a tad to upfront...maybe bring it back a bit and some widening, nice kick :) ya that synth could definetly be warmer.
wow...u have an amazing voice.
this song doesn't do it any justice kuz i can't really hear it.
put ur voice where the synth is and bring back the synth to where ur voice is.
really like the bassline and the percussion work, voice is beautiful.
quite a bit of level issues but nothing that can't be fixed.
solid track :) |
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| Akia |
| Thank you very mutch Mr Rogers! :gsmile: I agree with you about the synth, it gives a nice atmosphere but takes over a bit too mutch. Glad to hear you like my voice! I didnīt think I could sing at all! :D |
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| Sunclyder |
Not bad ;)
Overal is good but i don't like one synth at begging,
Keep it up
Greetings
www.sunclyder.com |
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| Akia |
| Thanks Sunclyder, I really appreciate that you not find it bad! ;) |
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| jupiterone |
Grabbing this now will update when I finish listening:)
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Like said previously, nice track, nice vocals and really nice voice:)
I love the overall vibe of this track. Kick is fantastic in my opinion and so are the percs.
The break does the job well
Really like the melody in this track, very nice.
Overall good work and keep it up! :) |
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| Akia |
| Thank you jupiterone, means a lot! :gsmile: |
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