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PhilB & Akia - Vocal trance (unfinished) (pg. 5)
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| Akia |
| I will let you know! And next time I can promise you will hear the difference! ;) |
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| mavve |
| Glad I could help =) |
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| Synthirius |
I enjoyed the track, but the vocals aren't clear enough, i could not understand the most of it, perhaps the setup of the hardware you use could be better, or perhaps also some software settings could imporve the vocals.
Thanks for sharing ! |
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| Akia |
| Yeah, you´ve right, we will check that. Thanks Synthirius! :gsmile: |
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| pho mo |
| Hi Akia, thanks very much for listening to my song! I'd love to hear your tune but the link is down :whip: Can you please post it again? cheers :p |
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| Akia |
Your song is really nice Pho mo, I enjoyed! :gsmile: Of course I will post the link for you, but PhilB has worked hard with it since (I have just written the lyrics and singin), so I will give you an updated version. Let us know what you think! :gsmile:
****Final version****
http://philb.jamura-music.com/audio/Knight_of_Dark.mp3 |
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| BX748 |
Production is not bad, voice is sweet and 'atmospheric' but need a bit more of volume, I would work more on the drums area and add some interesting loops, bass is very simple ( I like it like that ) but for this track would be good to make it more dynamic.
The synths are just amazing, but they could be much better, try to use some effect processors like a compressor, chorus, delay and reverb (all together), apply just a bit of each one, don't overload them; then try to use the synths more along the song because this is going to be the main component along with the voice.
Strings, turn the volume down a bit and use an essemble effect and add very long high notes at some points.
Last thing, To make sure that everything have the right amount of volume turn the overall volume down to the minimum, once every thing is down is very easy to re-touch all volumes, start listening to the kick, then the bass, then the strings, voice and synths. If you get this right at low volume, it will sound much better when you turn it to a very loud point.
cheers
BX748 |
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| Akia |
| Thank you for this review, means a lot! :gsmile: |
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| Flaus |
| yeah cool track keep on working :toocool: I like especially the vocals which make me want to listen to it again and again :gsmile: |
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| Akia |
| :happy2: Thanks Flaus! :happy2: |
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| Klangzentrum |
sounds cool so far...
vocals should be a bit louder...
some more noticeable delay on the last words of each pattern would sound good, imo...
the strings need some equalizing work, they sound a bit digital, compared to the rest of the track
i mostly enjoyed the breaks-parts...
with some more work this could turn out very good... keep it up! ;) |
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| sentinelproject |
nice track, reminds me of "Another day"
spice up the vocal with some FX; chorus delay, and verb.
the break beat part could you a better kick, more boomy... |
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