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Poems ... ??? anyone (pg. 10)
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| whiskers |
clenching your flesh
with my dirty nails,
i can't start afresh
when everything fails
i want to break free,
but you drag me down
won't you let me be?
just off and drown.
ahh, that is disturbing. but i'm impressed, only took me like 50 seconds this time and things actually rhyme :D |
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| Dj Dovla |
| nice stuff ... 50 seconds is good ,, you going for a record ?? try 40 sec next time . hehe :) ;) |
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| davinox |
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| halexander837 |
Trance can somtimes be poetic and I found that out listening to Dj Carlos's Everyone's Tears on Liquid Trance. The poem has a special meaning to it; different tears for different emotions. But I couldn't find out who did the vocals. Here's the poem...
Pain, fear, exhaustion, frustration
How deep do the fluids of Emotion Run?
Tears of Joy
Tears of Fear
Painful Tears
Tears to commnicate
When unable to Speak
Tears to protect
The delicate Senses
Tears of Exhaustion
Squeezed out with a yawn
Tears hidden
Until in a sanctuary of privacy
Tears revealing pain
As a single drop
Cascades
Tears to soften headaches
Glossy Eyes
Foggy Eyes turn Listic
The waterworks by the mind's command
How deep do the fluids of emotion run? |
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| nic01445 |
YOU ARE SO UGLY
wear makeup
you stupid bitch.
you look like a goatse memorial.
i'll spray you with katchup.
i'll crap in your snatch.
i'll give you a ******* tutorial. |
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| Mr. Pink |
| LMAO@you are so ugly |
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| davinox |
| quote: | Originally posted by nic01445
YOU ARE SO UGLY
wear makeup
you stupid bitch.
you look like a goatse memorial.
i'll spray you with katchup.
i'll crap in your snatch.
i'll give you a ******* tutorial. |
HAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAavHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHahAHAHAHAHAHAHhahahahahahaAHhah
ahaha |
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| ))the source(( |
for some reason I did not find 'You are so ugly' that amusing. Actually, it's kind of pathetic.
So, to change it up a bit...
left and right
right and left
they suffocate me
to my death
an inch away
suspiciously kind
stealing my air
raping my mind
suddenly I see
all has turned black
unable to love
from heart attack
I waste away
no one can see
this solemn life
sharp misery
right and left
left and right
I hold myself
in space so tight |
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| ))the source(( |
...and now part 2 to my last one:
they are under my bed
they are in the walls
they sit behind me
they follow me down halls
they stare at my soul
they know I don't see
they want what is here
they tear into me
they are vicious and sly
they are your friends
they cut your throat, but
they make ammends
they are your family
they are everyone close
they are all strangers
they kill you the most
they are partake in conspiracy
they really don't care
they want you to drown
they want your air |
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| Miss Bliss |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mr. Pink
Silence:
Snap out of it! You understand me. You know exactly what I'm saying!
I don't even have to say it for you to know what it is.
I'm not going to state it. I'm not going to "tell" you.
See beyond words, see beyond text!
This is not a poem!
Look for the circle!
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Props to you. I really like. :cool: |
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| nchs09 |
| quote: | Originally posted by nic01445
YOU ARE SO UGLY
wear makeup
you stupid bitch.
you look like a goatse memorial.
i'll spray you with katchup.
i'll crap in your snatch.
i'll give you a ******* tutorial. |
OMFGIDIE!!!!:stongue: :stongue: :stongue: :stongue: :stongue: :stongue: :stongue: :stongue: :stongue: :stongue: :stongue: :stongue: :stongue: :stongue: |
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| Mr. Pink |
| quote: | Originally posted by Miss Bliss
Props to you. I really like. :cool: |
Muchas gracias.
much appreciated |
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