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Haiku Competition (pg. 12)
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| astroboy |
Here is a quick attempt by me:
Walking through the street
The men stop to fix their ties
All we are is dust
and another:
Writing this Haiku
Makes my naughty bits tingle
I know I am weird |
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| Palivar |
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| Ravesquad |
lets watch the stars fall
sparkling through the atmosphere
soon you will be near |
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| cycloptor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Palivar
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that is not haiku
in fact, its not even close
please, try it again |
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| Sand Leaper |
Guess I have to contribute a bit more,too!
RIAA
^^^^^^^
Greedy and money
mad bastards destroy the
pleasure of sharing
FIREWALL
^^^^^^^^^
Melodic beauty
Sizzling beats and basslines
What are these tears doing?
OK,the last line here is a bit too long,but when Orbax can get away with writing:
| quote: | Yeah GO TRANCE SEEKER
I am a drunk drunk drunk drunk
drunk drunk drunk drunk man |
I think that's alright.;) |
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| mos man |
Here you go fellas
This is our haiku siggy
Hope you think its cool
(http://www.geocities.com/ministry231184/tranceaddicthaikualliance.txt is the url to use :thepirate ) |
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| Orbax |
1) what the hell is that picture palivar put up
2) I was drunk when I wrote that Haiku (pretty good huh!)
3) That hiaku alliance text doesnt work for me for some reason |
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| mos man |
To get the signiture to work add this to your profile
[*img]http://www.geocities.com/ministry231184/tranceaddicthaikualliance.txt[/img]
But do not include the * which is in the first set of brackets...
Simple as :thepirate |
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| Palivar |
Mono - Life In Mono:
The stranger sang a theme
From someone else’s dream
The leaves began to fall
And no one spoke at all
But I can’t seem to recall
When you came along
Ingenue
Ingenue
I just don’t know what to do
The tree-lined avenue
Begins to fade from view
Drowning past regrets
In tea and cigarettes
But I can’t seem to forget
When you came along
Ingenue
Ingenue
I just don’t know what to do
Ingenue
I just don’t know what to do
Ingenue
I just don’t know what to do
Ingenue
I just don’t know what to do
Ingenue
lyrics courtesy of http://www.bb.8m.com/sarkisoz/mono.html |
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| cycloptor |
| hmmm...the sig dosent appear to be working for me either... on another note...what the hell is palivar posting?? |
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| cycloptor |
| never mind... it works now... i am dumb |
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