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Haiku Competition (pg. 19)
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Chewy
reading this tonight
i don't want to go to sleep
damn you funny guys!
Orbax
I stand on a hill
my darkness absorbs the light
embraces lose warmth
niteshayde
silence deafening
heartbeat pulsating through me
lips touch upon mine
Orbax
so little so much
few beats and simple rythm
the house goes crazy
fr0st
so do i win?
cycloptor
i thihk orbax or myself should win. but the real winners are YOU!! the reading public. :p



spin spin spin spin spin
barf barf ahhhhh spin spin spin spin
... to be young again
fr0st
i went for quality over quantity
Orbax
*in yoda voice* That is why you fail!

Nice one BTW cyclopter lol

eight long silky legs
eyes and mouths are everywhere
so how was YOUR night?
niteshayde
my throat is killing
i have caught a ing cold
i feel very ill
niteshayde
my boyfriend complains
i write no haiku on him
these next few are his

his name is binkun
a TA member like us
a lover of trance

he takes care of me
and gives mindblowing kisses
while holding my hands

he is a thinker
no shallow boyfriend is he
perfection his goal

i sit on his lap
and let him cuddle me close
while he surfs TA

he loves to dj
particularly hard trance
which is fine by me

i ing love him
or love ing him?
haha...both i think

so let these haikus
be dedicated to you
my boyfriend binkun

niteshayde
(apologies my fellow readers...i made a mistake in one of them...syllable wise...sorry..haha)
mos man
aww thats sweet :p
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