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Haiku Competition (pg. 9)
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| SmellsExcellent |
THE ULTIMATE PARADOX: Ultimate
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discraft ultra-star
flatball is the game we play
laid-back yet hard-core
cheers,
Marc
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| Orbax |
Interlude
my eyes see but one
her face swimming in my mind
will you marry me
~~~Xxx{{{TrancEaddicT Haiku Alliance}}}xxX~~~ |
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| SmellsExcellent |
orbax, think about girlies much?
lol. :p
;)
-m
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| Orbax |
| Lol why do you say that :conf: haha ahhh but anyways. Yeah I do. Theyre great |
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| Sand Leaper |
| quote: | | Im going to need some more bro. Those werent even 5 7 5!!! DO OVER!!! |
Hey that's not fair!!Many of the Haikus you guys write arent't 5 7 5,(or maybe I've got the rule wrong,in that case,please give an example of how it should look)so why the hell should I be forced to follow those rules like a slave?!!:( |
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| Orbax |
| read cyclopters and mine. thats what they look like. haiku is a concept like the number three. if it doesnt have certain properties it isnt a haiku its just a regular poem :eyespop: |
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| Orbax |
first gear, second gear
the roar of a huge engine
goodbye four banger
jiggling boobies
big silver dollar nipples
a really fat man
there not about girls :crazy:
man girls are more fun to write about this sux!
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| Sand Leaper |
OK,so things like "I","It's","to" and so on don't count as a syllable.
That makes sense.But:
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jiggling boobies
big silver dollar nipples
a really fat man
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Where's the 5 7 5 rule in here?I'm a bit confused. |
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| Orbax |
its a syllable count not word count
jig a ling boob ies
big sil ver dol lar nipp les
a real ly fat man
clap as you say the word lol |
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| Sand Leaper |
| Ah,so that's how it goes.Well,I guess I'll have to hit you a second time with some haikus,then.Stay tuned for those. |
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| Orbax |
guess what I just did
I kept us on the first page
rah rah shish koom bah
her tongue on her lips
her dress falls to the carpet
a bra on a lamp
~~~Xxx{{{TrancEaddicT Haiku Alliance}}}xxX~~~ |
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| cycloptor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Orbax
guess what I just did
I kept us on the first page
rah rah shish koom bah
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ahahahahahahahahaha... nice....:D :p :D
DALLAS COWBOYS
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talentless blunders
full of crack feinds and convicts
oh my god, we suck |
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