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Haiku Competition (pg. 13)
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| Palivar |
In my dreams I'm dying all the time
As I wake its kaleidoscopic mind
I never meant to hurt you
I never meant to lie
So this is goodbye
This is goodbye
Tell the truth you never wanted me
Tell me
In my dreams I'm jealous all the time
As I wake I'm going out of my mind
Going out of my mind
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lyrics courtesy of http://www.moby.org/lyrics/porcelain.html |
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| mos man |
| quote: | Originally posted by cycloptor
never mind... it works now... i am dumb |
| quote: | Originally posted by Orbax
not workin :wtf: |
:haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :haha: :thepirate |
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| Orbax |
I guess I wasnt capping IMG ..weird.
You talkin to me?
his face is beauty
because I just got done with
my boot toe of art
with me again
no, seriously do it
when you recover
Last night left me some angst |
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| cycloptor |
| quote: | Originally posted by Orbax
Last night left me some angst |
...appairently.... last night was great for me though :)
laying in the dark
under a blanket, with you
no words can describe |
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| Orbax |
These are my basic things of life poems.
sex
our feet caressing
our arms and legs intertwined
it isnt a myth!*
beer
CHUG CHUG CHUG they shout
three beers at once I think, wow
my back teeth afloat
*the female orgasm |
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| SmellsExcellent |
| quote: | Originally posted by Orbax
These are my basic things of life poems.
sex
our feet caressing
our arms and legs intertwined
it isnt a myth!*
beer
CHUG CHUG CHUG they shout
three beers at once I think, wow
my back teeth afloat
*the female orgasm |
LOL!! nice use of footnoting.. haa..
and Paliver, you posted "Life in Mono".... I love that song even though its kinda wuss, but its awesome at the same time..r eally chilly and laidback.. :)
-m |
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| DJ_Bod |
Here's one I wrote yesterday:
United we stand.
This day to honor our vets.
Memorial Day.
whatcha think? |
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| cycloptor |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ_Bod
Here's one I wrote yesterday:
United we stand.
This day to honor our vets.
Memorial Day.
whatcha think? |
GOGOGOGOGOGOGOGO AMERICA!!!!!
ok...all sarcasim aside its a lovely thought to write a poem like that. good stuff. |
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| Orbax |
nice memorial poem :)
Morality IS
human standards come and go
endless night escapes |
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| Orbax |
We almost got sent
to the never seen page 2
we thank you orbax |
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| DJ_Bod |
Thanks Orbax. We don't want to go to the black hole known as page 2. LOL.
OK Haiku time:
Today I want sleep.
Up for way too long last night.
It's my own fault though.
To have you with me,
Is the only thing I need,
I love you so much.
That last one was for my girlfriend. She's not a TA, but I still love her. |
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| cycloptor |
work sucks hard today
its sunny out, why oh why
dont i run away |
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