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Haiku Competition (pg. 17)
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niteshayde
alone we appear
but not for long we dare hope
please, someone free us
Orbax
head bowed hair swaying
she grieves for those who have been
the earth takes her tears
Orbax
a beam of light shines down
the ground trembles in his wake
he is king of kings
niteshayde
two demonic hands
strangle life from my pale throat
tis only a dream
Rhythm
A State of Trance OWNZ
Why can't Ferry have a show
A System of F

:disbelief :thepirate
Renegade
My haiku is crap.
Though I try to be witty,
The words make no sense.

This sequel, is worse.
It deserves a bad response.
I need to give up.

What was I thinking,
Entering a haiku comp?
I must be insane.
niteshayde
the sky remains dark
forever a shade of gray
such is weather here
Orbax
a lock of her hair
a single warm summer night
and my memories
niteshayde
i can hear his voice
almost glimpse his face and smile
from within my mind
niteshayde
what magic lies here?
the air so fragrant, poignant
a forgotten past

PSi
heres my ass lick it
those balls you see come lick it
this room's hot im gone


to foo PSI in da house
Orbax
touching PSI...truly touching


I feel like drinkin
its a ing friday night
and I do haiku
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