| kadomony |
| quote: | Originally posted by RJT
Looks good but the text is too large and I don't like the way you have the names at the top formatted - too spread out.
I say keep the text towards the top and bottom of the page, reduce the font size, and maybe get rid of the pictures (though that's not really necessary) and it will be one heck of a first flier. |
| quote: | Originally posted by lücid
try lowering the opacity of the background image and make sure there's just a plain black background behind it. when you're using a distressed typeface, you always want to make sure that it's legible enough. the black stroke around it helps, but i still think it's a bit hard to read.
also i'd maybe decrease the font size of the information at the bottom. |
cool, thanks for the tips! i'll work on it a bit more today and post the results.
lücid, i really like that background image and the opacity is down on it to 73% over a black background. i'll see what i can do to make the font more readable though. thanks again. |
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