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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 109)
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| chris marsh |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
i changed the kick on this one as i didnt really like the original - how u like me now???
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Cool tune
i like the fx and background sounds a lot
for me the kick is working great, but the bass isn't working. I would say replace it. I think the bass needs to be more interesting/layered and perhaps could move about a bit too
like the sizzling rides, nice :)
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| chris marsh |
Hi guys
This is a collab, and vocals still pretty raw etc. The instrumental still needs work too
Im really trying to look at the arrangement and the song more than anything ATM.
Bit unsure about the arrangement ATM. Once weve sorted it we will rerecord vocals and produce it/ mix it down proper
Thanks
C
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by chris marsh
Hi guys
This is a collab, and vocals still pretty raw etc. The instrumental still needs work too
Im really trying to look at the arrangement and the song more than anything ATM.
Bit unsure about the arrangement ATM. Once weve sorted it we will rerecord vocals and produce it/ mix it down proper
Thanks
C
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I like the vocals , not sure they need re - recording mate? Sometimes I don't always want everything ultra polished.
Nice easy going vibe. Personally this sort of track just rolls along, I don't think it needs any kind of spectacular arrangement, just variation and perhaps a couple of breaks.
Love that tom in the beat, you must not remove that as it makes the track grove very well.
This kind of track me and my Brother will play in the car when riding up to London, just nodding along but do give it a bit of silky killer bass to really make it shine. Bring in the bass after quite a while as this track you can get away with that and the tension and release would be real nice.
Don't really know if this helps.
Always loved those 3 am Rhodes sounds mate. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by chris marsh
Hi guys
This is a collab, and vocals still pretty raw etc. The instrumental still needs work too
Im really trying to look at the arrangement and the song more than anything ATM.
Bit unsure about the arrangement ATM. Once weve sorted it we will rerecord vocals and produce it/ mix it down proper
Thanks
C
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Really nice mate, really cool and sweet chillout vibe is moving along this WIP - almost can feel "SOUL" style dominating it and that's good, really good sign man - me like it ;)
If I would have a chance to tweak something in this track I would spice up a bit this part at 1:34 (maybe by adding a secondary synth underneath of the first one)
Cheers,
Darek |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Sensuerea
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It is something really memorable man and with proper arrangement can grow to pretty sweet production.
Try to add more reverb on your intro guitar and after (let say) 16 bars slowly start to unwind your melodic arrangement with some additional sounds/instrument - and vocal would be really cool addition to this type of track.
You can contact soundcloud.com/zefora for this particular task as she really shine in this style (and she is from Portland, OR)
Cheers mate,
Darek |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by chris marsh
Hi guys
This is a collab, and vocals still pretty raw etc. The instrumental still needs work too
Im really trying to look at the arrangement and the song more than anything ATM.
Bit unsure about the arrangement ATM. Once weve sorted it we will rerecord vocals and produce it/ mix it down proper
Thanks
C
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wouldnt be something id ever listen to but the production sounds nice! |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Sensuerea
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could be some nice background music for tv/film??? |
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| evo8 |
some more techno - anyone else doing techno here?? anyone????? :nervous:
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| jf2010 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
some more techno - anyone else doing techno here?? anyone????? :nervous:
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Really nice track man. Liking the timing of the little bass sound u have there, and the sound itself. The basics of the track sound really good, more work on this and it could sound huge! |
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| jf2010 |
did some more work on this, bit different than usual so any feedback is appreciated, cheers |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by jf2010
did some more work on this, bit different than usual so any feedback is appreciated, cheers |
Is this your own concept or just remix??
Darek |
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