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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 198)
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| Richard Butler |
Sean the drums are spot on - I know this style quite well - lovin your vocals.
The glichy synth lines later on are ok but for me a bit generic but I suspect the audience would still welcome them for a while until tastes change.
Great all round work. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seandroid
When did you listen? I actually just replaced the file on it not very long ago. The drums are very present now.
I'm actually really happy with my vocal take!! I did many! Haha. I ain't winning any idol competitions, I know.
EDIT: Turns out I hadn't actually uploaded my replacement. Derp. I have now. |
Will send you PM with contact to play on the air.
Darek |
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| vercetti |
Droid you ing ****. Awesome tune, and I hate brostep. HAVE THOSE ING VOCALS LOUDER!!! Good thing you found the confidence to actually sing, now find the confidence to turn the vocals up +10db
edit: intro is ok, then at 1:00 *everything else* has to be quieter than vocals and the same is at 2:30something |
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| Seandroid |
| quote: | Originally posted by vercetti
Droid you ing ****. Awesome tune, and I hate brostep. HAVE THOSE ING VOCALS LOUDER!!! Good thing you found the confidence to actually sing, now find the confidence to turn the vocals up +10db
edit: intro is ok, then at 1:00 *everything else* has to be quieter than vocals and the same is at 2:30something |
Thanks! I think the vocals in the chorus should be good now. I also improved the stereo width of them. |
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| Domesty |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seandroid
After spending a totally obnoxious amount of time on this track, I think I've finally nailed it. I've mentioned it before, but I sang the vocals on this one too! |
I remember this you posted it MONTHS ago, at least the vocals were same.
The vocals work very well, in the breakdown you could try to bring it up little more.
As been said, percussions seems like lil bit maybe lagging behind.
I mean its a slow paced beat nothing like fast DnB, but i would love to hear some rolls or break beat like perc work :) Matter of taste though.
You'v done very well with this!
I'v been jamming around so much since i got my original axiom to work and apc40 mk2 arrived.
Hope the def limiter didnt completely destroy the levels. Kick seems maybe little bit off? |
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| Richard Butler |
An early WIP - any thoughts on this? edit I loaded up a better mix
I will do some more feedback on others tracks shortly.
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
here we go, finally got a chance to upload. :)
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Superb track and quality all round mate. No crits. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
Been wanting to make something with some Dream Pop influences:
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Listened to it a few times, could do with slightly more warm mids present but I guess you don't want to loose that far away fantasy feel for which those sugary hi synths are perfect.
Id maybe drop the drums in at 2.14 instead.
Possible some snare hits should be a lot drier so as to vary things up a bit.
I think you've nailed the style, nice track. |
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| PaULiN0 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Domesty
I remember this you posted it MONTHS ago, at least the vocals were same.
The vocals work very well, in the breakdown you could try to bring it up little more.
As been said, percussions seems like lil bit maybe lagging behind.
I mean its a slow paced beat nothing like fast DnB, but i would love to hear some rolls or break beat like perc work :) Matter of taste though.
You'v done very well with this!
I'v been jamming around so much since i got my original axiom to work and apc40 mk2 arrived.
Hope the def limiter didnt completely destroy the levels. Kick seems maybe little bit off? |
This is my kinda tune, sounds wicked. Mixing is good and I'm not familiar with the structure although it appears to be working for you. I usually bring my bass at the 1:00 min mark. Anyway everything is in tune unlike my stuff lol. anyway good luck with it and cheers.
Heere's mine. I know the climax melody isn't there because for special ima introduce in the break down and outro while taking some stuff out like story teller told me.
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| PaULiN0 |
| Huzaaahhh, praise the lord! Yeah i forgot to add crashes and noise sweeps, s naked hehe. Yeah you're def right mono the bass, will do homie, cheers. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
An early WIP - any thoughts on this? edit I loaded up a better mix
I will do some more feedback on others tracks shortly.
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Rich I listened to this a few times b4 you took it down. I thought the songwriting was great, it was catchy (I was even remembering the track the next day which is a good indicator), the sound design didn't seem too sophisticated but a nice track to build on. |
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| itsamemario |
And they said it would never work, that it couldn't be done and that my thread would fail at once!! Mwuahaahahaha what say you now?!?
Lol this is like the biggest thread on TA :wtf: |
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