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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 250)
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| Floorfiller |
Like the second half. Has a nice groove and flows nicely. Don't really think that intro part has enough teeth to act as a main melody, if that was the intention. |
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| Evolve140 |
| to be completely honest i'm not sure what the intention there was. i'm totally open to suggestion on this one. |
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| Evolve140 |
| off to a slow start but it builds well. nice punchy mixing on the low/mid stuff. tho not fanatic about the kick tho and the drums are a bit loopy for me. hard to read the track where it's going and so forth, it is what it is. mixing is okay but stays pretty safe |
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| scorpradio |
Dig it actually man..house vibe with some melodic overtones. And personally, I like that kick. I find it very suitable.
The vox chop has a nice feel to it as well.
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Ok..this is going to be rather comical. I am about to serve a plate full of cheese =OP
I have never worked on a dubstep track before and have been urged to do so for quite some time. Needless to say I decided to go for it.
Again, it is cheesy and I know this is a trance board but I just wanted to get a reaction.
Maybe someone like seandroid might have some clue as to the mess I just created....lol
Funy thing is, it isn't even on 140 bpm but rather a rock tempo of 87. Added some trap elements as well. Protect your ears on this one..lol
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| TranceElevation |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Protect your ears on this one..lol |
<< Aaaah NO! Won't even bother pressing play >> |
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| deegee |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Ok..this is going to be rather comical. I am about to serve a plate full of cheese =OP |
Definitely cheese, but could see it as the music under the opening credits or ______montage in some action flick. |
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| Storyteller |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Ok..this is going to be rather comical. I am about to serve a plate full of cheese =OP
I have never worked on a dubstep track before and have been urged to do so for quite some time. Needless to say I decided to go for it.
Again, it is cheesy and I know this is a trance board but I just wanted to get a reaction.
Maybe someone like seandroid might have some clue as to the mess I just created....lol
Funy thing is, it isn't even on 140 bpm but rather a rock tempo of 87. Added some trap elements as well. Protect your ears on this one..lol
(fyi-terrible rip at 192 as its on mixcloud. Hearing it now sounds like it was massively compressed,which it is) |
Like! Really cool. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
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It sounds good but I think I recognise some of the samples so maybe mask em / mangle them / personalise them. I might be wrong though, but some sound very familiar? |
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| scorpradio |
Thanks for the feedback all..lol yea cheese ::frowns::
Yea Richard, I'll have to ask my friend on this one..lol I know he said he used a "few" samples on this (as I suck at Reese)
With that said however when I got back the ableton file (we were trading off) what I saw was fairly chopped up so I will take a closer look when I get home. |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Ok..this is going to be rather comical. I am about to serve a plate full of cheese =OP
I have never worked on a dubstep track before and have been urged to do so for quite some time. Needless to say I decided to go for it.
Again, it is cheesy and I know this is a trance board but I just wanted to get a reaction.
Maybe someone like seandroid might have some clue as to the mess I just created....lol
Funy thing is, it isn't even on 140 bpm but rather a rock tempo of 87. Added some trap elements as well. Protect your ears on this one..lol
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For me this track is missing a little sub-melodic theme or some form of break with this melodic element driving it but the rest sounded interesting and Sean (Seandroid) may give you some more advice how to conect everything properly.
Cheers man,
Darek |
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