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| SystematicX1 |
Very early WIP No Mix (and clipping) but feel with some layering this could be cool (especially with the lead and stabs). Would for sure be my most "EDM" sounding track to date.
Thoughts...to much cheese? lol
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
Very early WIP No Mix (and clipping) but feel with some layering this could be cool (especially with the lead and stabs). Would for sure be my most "EDM" sounding track to date.
Thoughts...to much cheese? lol
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Played your wip in a room where my wife was sitting next to me. When she realised that this wasn't my song she said - oh, thanks God. But if it was my track she would kept her mouth quiet so she wouldn't hurt my feelings. That's why i like to drop tracks here :)
Imho you need more lowend in your production, and less bright noisy leads and crispy stuff. Or this stuff needs a strong backup because otherwise whole mix sounds just crisp and half empty. Some of your more quiet songs are very nice. |
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| SystematicX1 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Played your wip in a room where my wife was sitting next to me. When she realised that this wasn't my song she said - oh, thanks God. But if it was my track she would kept her mouth quiet so she wouldn't hurt my feelings. That's why i like to drop tracks here :)
Imho you need more lowend in your production, and less bright noisy leads and crispy stuff. Or this stuff needs a strong backup because otherwise whole mix sounds just crisp and half empty. Some of your more quiet songs are very nice. |
LOL!! Yea, it isn't my usual..lol But needless it's young. It's the hook that kept me rolling it. Bottom end is no problem which I usually start off with,however obviously on this one it has yet to be added.
Thanks man and Thank your wife for me =OP |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Any crits - is it quiet? Thx guys
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Richard I just have to tell you that this is possibly the best to day track from you but you need to work on your mix levels man - it is beautiful work :D
Darek |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
I don't know Darek, it sounds nice and everything but it's like i already heard dozens of tracks like that
Here's an idea (for a track, not saying there are memorable elements in it)
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nice Gordan |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Any crits - is it quiet? Thx guys
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I usually turn my monitors down a bit before launching one of your tracks so I got a surprise here lol, sounds like you just rendered it lower?
its an ok track, the bassline puts me off, sorry |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
Very early WIP No Mix (and clipping) but feel with some layering this could be cool (especially with the lead and stabs). Would for sure be my most "EDM" sounding track to date.
Thoughts...to much cheese? lol
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cool little track reminds me of the early 90s stuff with that lead synth! really clean mixing |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Played your wip in a room where my wife was sitting next to me. When she realised that this wasn't my song she said - oh, thanks God. But if it was my track she would kept her mouth quiet so she wouldn't hurt my feelings. That's why i like to drop tracks here :)
Imho you need more lowend in your production, and less bright noisy leads and crispy stuff. Or this stuff needs a strong backup because otherwise whole mix sounds just crisp and half empty. Some of your more quiet songs are very nice. |
emptiness (space) in mixes not necessarily a bad thing ;) |
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| MSZ |
Could I get some feedback on this kick/bass/mix. I've switched mixing environments last month and having trouble getting what I want.
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by MSZ
Could I get some feedback on this kick/bass/mix. I've switched mixing environments last month and having trouble getting what I want.
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Levels sounds good on my end Mac, clean and well balanced so far - only one suggestion for you is to spreed your drums wide a bit for full listening effect as right now you only doing it to pad/s.
Cheers,
Darek |
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| MSZ |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Levels sounds good on my end Mac, clean and well balanced so far - only one suggestion for you is to spreed your drums wide a bit for full listening effect as right now you only doing it to pad/s.
Cheers,
Darek |
I'll fool around with that. There is some weird ass distortion happening in my mixer, dont really know whats up tbh. |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
emptiness (space) in mixes not necessarily a bad thing ;) |
Yeah, i know i overcrowd my mixes :)
How's this?
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