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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 229)
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I've tried to even out the vocals and remove most of those machine gun kicks, also made lots of other changes, harmony's (some of u will not like these) etc, I think I'm done.
Feedback as ever has been invaluable. Makes me realise how confident some producers are that do not require this process.
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nice one Richard, like this now |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I've tried to even out the vocals and remove most of those machine gun kicks, also made lots of other changes, harmony's (some of u will not like these) etc, I think I'm done.
Feedback as ever has been invaluable. Makes me realise how confident some producers are that do not require this process.
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It was quite a work Richard, really enjoyed this track - not much more to say, looks like this is almost ready to go shopping lol ;)
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| Oakenshield |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
staying on a prog theme, happy with this one also!
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that sounds well cool once it hits the 1 min mark! i still cant get my atmosphere to sound good as you yet but i think im slowely gettin there.
i have shortend the start of mine down a bit il upload it later
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I really like the melody and chord work once it gets going and it sounds good to. Maybe the open hat is a bit standard though. |
Thank you i will look into changeing some of perc as i dont think it stands out enough
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
So the feedback I got on this caused me to try and make something more atmospheric, I hope I've pulled it off.
Any mix issues - bass too wooden for example? Maybe this bass no longer suits this changed track?
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thats very funky! i have a few tunes on wax like that! the mix sounds ok but the lead and bass sound a bit flat to me but maybe thats what you was looking for! every thing else sounds cool though.
it seems i didnt notice the new version mate LOL the base sounds good in the newest post!
its still mostly structure no fx etc in it but is that better than the first?
small change in the hats that better now?
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| Domesty |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
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Wow! These vocals are great and their delays are spot on. Love the flanged stuff you have going on the background.
Very atmospheric and groovy track. Loving this!
Your mixes are really thight and they work. I would however go trough the open-hat sample. Sounds like its sticking out too much.
| quote: | Originally posted by sylvannas
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Very dynamic and well built stuff. The mix is awesome excluding the snare as it being mentioned before. |
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| sylvannas |
I love it - needs moar lazer sounds in between :D |
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| Mise |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I've tried to even out the vocals and remove most of those machine gun kicks, also made lots of other changes, harmony's (some of u will not like these) etc, I think I'm done.
Feedback as ever has been invaluable. Makes me realise how confident some producers are that do not require this process.
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You got a really nice funky groove here, vocals are good, and the mix sound fine too, I would prefer more centered cymbal though. |
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| Mise |
| quote: | Originally posted by evo8
something a little proggier
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Mix is solid, I think its your best work so far.. there is something missing, I dont know what, some element, instrument to make it stand out. |
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| TranceElevation |
| It's too quiet bro. You need to turn it up more... |
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| Mr.Mystery |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceElevation
It's too quiet bro. You need to turn it up more... |
Sounds fine to me, maybe you need to turn your volume up. |
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| Innocence Lost |
| Yup sounds good here. |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Mise
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like the style of this, the bassline, kinda psy-ish?? i think you could do better with those stabs that hit the same time as the clap, doesnt work for me :-/ |
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