Originally posted by Raphie
So I got my cirklon and being more or less DAW less, here is a first Jam getting to know all the specifics, it's all live work so very dirty and loose feel, but going quite deep (when you're into it)
quite repetitive with subtle nuances, which, you appreciate, or not :D anyhow let me know....
snare is putting me off, not bad for a demo i suppose
evo8
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Originally posted by meriter
im planning on releasing these two tomorrow and could really use some last opinions on the mix, specifically the low-end, i said this before but all i have to monitor is kinda broken sony headphones, the foam is ed up so i get different bass response depending on where they are sitting
here are the two tracks, i know they are weird but any advice would be great and dont be afraid to suggest like +/- 0.5 db adjustments, looking at you raphie. I was just going to upload the 24 bit wav and let people download from soundcloud
sounds good but the rhodes type melodies dont really fit imo - i love that bass sound in the first track that comes in about halfway or so, really nice
evo8
put this together today, all opinions welcome as always! thanks
MSZ
Rodri I like that piece, except its too static, needs to keep moving, like maybe some white noise plastered in some side fields and more release I dunno. Also, I dont think that alternating bass synth is working in the track.
Evo8 sounds gr8 as always, maybe the kick is a little too heavy for my tastes.
TranceLover007
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Originally posted by Rodri Santos
Better than before but the bass needs some rework, it's clearly the main element but still has too much space and at points sound a bit weird with too much detune or something like that in my opinion. Idea is very cool but i think needs a bit of adjustments.
Juan Palino's untitled wip:
The problem with this track is the problem of most of your tracks, builds to nothing, hasn't got any peak moment.It is very interesting but the high expectations quickly decay when you see it goes forever.
Since melodies is not your thing you could use that as an intro fade it slowly to a break and then drop it with a tech trance bassline, heavy percussions + shakers +hats and some synth stabs that could work very well.
Evo8's track:
Not really my thing this kind of techno, bass may be too present. At 1:00 the drop needs some previous build. The hat sample isn't my cup of tea either. This is what Ben Klock plays and never gave it too much attention don't really know if it sounds as it should.
You are missing pop style vocal to this track and you could call it good Rodri - like this:
BTW it was very popular song in Europe lol
TranceLover007
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Originally posted by evo8
put this together today, all opinions welcome as always! thanks
Nice WIP so far man -> also splendid pad/s work which are creating quite catchy and melodic atmo in this track - me like it !!!
Cheers
meriter
^ nice atmosphere kick might be a little a lot too loud tho
Raphie
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Originally posted by evo8
put this together today, all opinions welcome as always! thanks
power! If anything, i think the ride cymbal pattern can be a bit more interesting and maye make the OHH a bit more distinct in some area's . But further great job!
evo8
thanks for comments all, i like my kicks loud :D
TranceLover007
Here we go guys, my WIP (actually very close to be done) is on the table now.
Need some massaging and polishing in transitions parts but structurally should be well defined -> I would like to here your opinions a specially from people who likes this particular type of EDM and from some who doesn't lol - Appreciate.
DCH New Concept September 15 2013 Mix NEW COMBO IDEA by DariusX.
Cheers,
Darek
evo8
quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here we go guys, my WIP (actually very close to be done) is on the table now.
Need some massaging and polishing in transitions parts but structurally should be well defined -> I would like to here your opinions a specially from people who likes this particular type of EDM and from some who doesn't lol - Appreciate.
DCH New Concept September 15 2013 Mix NEW COMBO IDEA by DariusX.
Cheers,
Darek
Darek the production is very nice (i think you posted this wip before at some stage it sounds familiar?)
I would lose that reverbed tom sound in the breakdown, doesnt really fit imo
Not sure on the way the song changes after the break? Does it need to change like that? I was kinda hoping it would drop in as it was before the break
Also i would be inclined to boost the very very top end to give a little bit of sheen
I like it though, its very difficult to get this type of track right without being too cheesy
MSZ
Nice music Dar, can you put this on youtube so I can listen to it more often after you're finished? I dont like soundcloud > <
I dont really have any criticism though. Reminds me a lot of Tom Cloud - Million miles away, and like that track so gj.
