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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
I updated it - still aligning the vocals. Hope to finish this shortly thanks for the advice and thoughts on this and the deepish house one
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Not my music style but I like all the sounds u used. Everything sounds very clear and nice. |
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Still on this. |
Quiet a unique sound here I like it. Only the hats aren't right for me, I would think more attacking short hats would work better here than shuffle hatz.
Anyway I actually finished a track, a lot of work since last posting but I'm happy enough. Vocals are kinda rough tho.
The trap vocal synth at 1.10 took me bloody hours. not sure if ok or not.
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| Evolve140 |
dialing in a bit more to the sound im after. |
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| AlphaStarred |
| ^ Percussion sounds pretty good, but the synth part could defo use some work. Maybe make it more drawn out, like in waves? |
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| Evolve140 |
| yeah needed to take a break from the point i was at. could focus on that a bit more |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by vercetti
Something like tech house is asking for a good judgement.
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Wow. This is a gorgeous track. I am no engineer but the bass end sounds really nice on my monitors. The only thing I noticed was maybe turn the clap up a notch? |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Still on this. |
This is cool, but is the kick a bit small? The snare/snap reminds me of Sasha - Xpander. Nice sound design and overall track! |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Constantin
just an old project re-done with the new toys I got :toothless
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I agree with Darek on the sound design, it is good, but still could be even better, and I'd imagine his advice is a good step to making it great.
It is a bit dated sounding. Kind of like something Armin would have released 8 years ago or so. Still, if it is the music you love to make, whether or not it is current only matters if you are going for a current sound. Overall, nice uplifting trance song. |
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| Trancelover03591 |
I know this forum isn't much into EDM but here is a track that DJ Veaux, Vin Harris & myself recently finished up:
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| Richard Butler |
| quote: | Originally posted by Evolve140
dialing in a bit more to the sound im after. |
love this groove and that bass is sumptuous. |
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Trancelover03591
I know this forum isn't much into EDM but here is a track that DJ Veaux, Vin Harris & myself recently finished up:
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I don't like it until 1:00. Especially hate it between 0:50 and 1:00 :), i just hate that edm pumpin'squeeking sounds. But then it starts to be pretty good. Good production and vocal. |
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