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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 61)
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| Deillon |
| quote: | Originally posted by sleeping
Not a big fan of the riser-sound actually. It gets a bit harsh to the ears. The gouryella-like basline is kinda cool, but i think it would fit better in a uplifter. Im not so keen on the detuned saw-lead either. Itīs too much for my taste. But the mixing is overall nice. Kind check the sidechian on the basline, casue it sometimes clash with the kick.
My turn, shred it into pieces:
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Cool cool I like it! |
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| Trancelover03591 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Seandroid
The thing with that track though is that the lead is far more percussive than yours and it definitely has more in the mid range. It's also triplets and 16ths so it's filling more of the space more often. |
Yeah, I see what you are saying. Thanks, I will make some changes. |
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| Evolve140 |
gettin' funky in the hizzy
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| Storyteller |
| You got a great vibe here! Technically it all fits very well. I just feel it isn't really going anywhere and I get bored along the way. |
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| meriter |
| ^ nice one! bassline could be meatier and less fuzzy imo |
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| Evolve140 |
thx guys.. you mean like another layer or something? i just like the fuzz cuz it makes it seem nice and gritty
@ST,
what would make it more interesting to you? |
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| Storyteller |
I could see how this one could do well with some vocals.
After the break it just feels a bit too much of what you did before. I'd love to see some alterations there. Maybe reintroduce the chords of the break or some other sounds. I like the grittyness by the way :). |
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| Andy28 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Storyteller
You got a great vibe here! Technically it all fits very well. I just feel it isn't really going anywhere and I get bored along the way. |
I agree with this. For me, 1:49 to the breakdown can be deleted it drags on a bit.
Not much else really happens after that. Starts really well though just needs to progress a lot more. |
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| Richard Butler |
Evolve it's got a nice vibe but imo would benefit from the following;
+ Bass is perhaps just slightly too loud. Automate the bass sound and it's noise element a little as the track proceeds, especially towards the break
+ open hat for me is slightly loud and could use say every 4 th one being overlayed with another open hat otherwise it becomes fatiguing. The same with the snare / clap - maybe a big one every 8th time.
+ Stop the intro at 1.49 I think
+ break I'm guessing your still working on - it could use a better personality and maybe be longer
+ drop - I agree with other comments it's a bit samey. Maybe drop to just kick and bass with some sorta techno reverb working of parts of the bass sound?
Well worth finishing this track it's nice mate |
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| Evolve140 |
| thanks again for the feedback guys, will keep it in mind. |
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| tehlord |
Not quite sure what I was doing here, but it started off when I downloaded some D16 products I forgot I'd bought and started dicking about running a saw wave through them.
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| Andy28 |
I really should hate this. It's everything I don't like but for what ever reason I quite like it. I probably like the mix more than the track if you know what I mean but I still enjoyed it.
| quote: | Originally posted by tehlord
Not quite sure what I was doing here, |
Aye it's not your usual stuff. The vox works rather well with the track and it's very catchy! Good mix as per from you.
Here's something Ive been working on last couple of days. It's only a little clip, I'm not too bothered about the track it self, I'm after feedback on the mix and how does it sound overall. Any help would be appreciated. Thanks.
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