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WIP thread (DJRYAN now allowed to post tracks) (pg. 226)
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| Oakenshield |
| quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
This was meant to be deep house but took a bit of a different turn.
How is the mix and everything your end?
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That sounds great on my cab units!
good feel to the track mix seems good all in all just a good track! |
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| Innocence Lost |
| Long live Thoren Oakenshield! |
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| gordan100 |
Hi everybody,
i'm an total music amateur, and everything i heard on this topic sounds more professional than my work, so i'm not pretty usefull for giving technical comments. I can only say if i like the song or not, and so i will, so help me god :)
What i need is a feedback for this track. I didn't work much on it. Deegee pointed out that main melody is off beat with the rest of the track. Sometimes I notice that, sometimes i don't. What do you guys think?
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| gordan100 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
some sound design in progress, want to end up with something tribal / dub techno deep thingy.... not really a song yet, just a jam mixing the elements,finding sweetspots, but you'll get the flavour
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Like what you have so far. |
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| TranceElevation |
| @gordon100, I would make a trance remake of that melody with pleasure. |
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| Oakenshield |
any one know were i got this melody from i swear i have heard it before!
its just the structure atm |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Oakenshield
any one know were i got this melody from i swear i have heard it before!
its just the structure atm |
Well, I started to be worry after 2 min mark as I only could hear some bass line (like 4 different layers) going with drums and finally just give up after 4 min mark because it wasn't much of progression going on past one chord - sorry mate but I would definitely like to hear some melody start to build around this time. You got some drive and energy but you need some good quality melody going on with the rest ;)
Just my $0.02
Darek |
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| Oakenshield |
| quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Well, I started to be worry after 2 min mark as I only could hear some bass line (like 4 different layers) going with drums and finally just give up after 4 min mark because it wasn't much of progression going on past one chord - sorry mate but I would definitely like to hear some melody start to build around this time. You got some drive and energy but you need some good quality melody going on with the rest ;)
Just my $0.02
Darek |
oh i know its no were done i was more wondering about the chords that come in as i swear ive heard it before but cant remember.
its also 1 min to long also haha |
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| TranceLover007 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Oakenshield
oh i know its no were done i was more wondering about the chords that come in as i swear ive heard it before but cant remember.
its also 1 min to long also haha |
I can't tell from your WIP, nothing comes to my mind.
Darek |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Hi everybody,
i'm an total music amateur, and everything i heard on this topic sounds more professional than my work, so i'm not pretty usefull for giving technical comments. I can only say if i like the song or not, and so i will, so help me god :)
What i need is a feedback for this track. I didn't work much on it. Deegee pointed out that main melody is off beat with the rest of the track. Sometimes I notice that, sometimes i don't. What do you guys think?
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this is quite cool! reminds me a little of the style of Jean Michel Jarre and stuff like that. I think you need something extra to come in as does sound a little samey, im sure your already working on that :) |
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| evo8 |
| quote: | Originally posted by Oakenshield
any one know were i got this melody from i swear i have heard it before!
its just the structure atm |
not bad, big improvement on the stuff i heard from you before! melody is very familiar but i cant place it, wouldnt worry about it! |
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| evo8 |
staying on a prog theme, happy with this one also!
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